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| Suzanne 2003-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought it was very good, cept that it was a bit fast paced. It started off fine but as it continued it seemed to become rushed like you were eager to finish it. Its a fine storyline and I liked it a lot but it might have benefitted from maybe having more too it. |
| Cardell 2003-09-02 ch 1,  | abuseI think this is a great story |
| Ryny 2003-08-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's really had to read if you look at it. So, maybe if people could read it, they will review it. I don't mean to sound mean or anything. |