This is awesome, it really is. Love and all such is not quite my forte, though it shows how much more impressive it was I loved this piece. I love anything with a Trance re-portrayed as well as you've done, and Harper is my close second favorite, that didn't hurt you either P I can actually see this as a real script, at least the first section. The abduction and recovery is masterfully done, though the date and such is somewhat weaker, though not bad, but kind of "meh, we've hit the climax already.."

Still, loved this thing, off to check your other stories P.

aw,that was brilliant, u write way good, i think it was great, and cute !

This is really good, really, really good. Well done, any plans for a sequel?

Nice story. One thing, though. At one point Trance was just standing motionless(that's not a coma) then she is suddenly dying. Just seemed abrupt. Other than that, good job.

Very nice rounded story. I liked it alot. You should to a second part maybe.