Very nice. ^^ I could kick myself for not being able to come up with a better compliment than that. Very creepy-like as well. Oh! And your penname, Dorian Gray. Is that from The Portrait of Dorian Gray? ^^ Sorry, just like to know. But anyways, great fic! ^^

~DL8

Wow, that was... really, really good. I have this problem where, when I encounter something this good, I can't find the words to tell the author how much I appreciated reading it.

This is one of those things, but, rest assured, it's very good.

Ugh, that was so chilling. The flowing *normalcy* of everything, how Muraki is so crazed while easing through everything. You captured the almost stream of consciousness that made Hisoka's rape seem, indeed, from Muraki's perspective, not anything special, but another night, another doll that broke easily.

...Once again, wow. That was more poetry than prose, more snippets of images and sounds and emotions, and all the more evocative of emotion for it. I have NEVER met anyone who captures Muraki so completely, who shows the root of his insanity and the depth to which is runs. I am impressed. Your style is original and as good as many published works. ...Thank you. I love Sensei so much.

Wow I am speechless. The effect of your writing piece was extremely powerful. This sounds like Muraki doing his typical murder scenario ^^;; His thoughts were written well and you were able to capture his dark, mysterious and crazy side with such style.

Wau... nice description! I love it !

Wow, you wrote on Muraki-san you really made us happy! He's a little... psycho, but somehow I understand his idealistic outlook.

Hey, every kid has wanted to be a doctor at some point. XP

But pleasure is also a purpose for many to kill; we aren't sure... technically it's hard to pinpoint. :D So good work, we really like this... she died.

*Cough* Umm, forget I said anything. ;_;

Truly disturbing. I adore your imagery and descriptions. Muraki is a very complex character to write, and you've captured him in all his twisted mad glory. I'm never going to like Muraki, but this piece is wonderful.

Beautifully written, unconventional sentences, as always. =) I find it a very new perspective of that incident, and a very interesting take, too.