Wow. This is such a powerful story amidst a ton of humor. It's simply wonderful.

I know it's been awhile since you've updated, so I hope you don't plan to leave it unfinished.

I'll be the first to admit that I really don't read to many fics centered around the Outers, only because I'm not that familiar with them, but I love how you're portraying them thus far. And of course, Mako-chan revenge is always sweet!

All hail the Evil Authoresses! It figures that you'd be able to combine Mako-justice AND Outer angst in one fic. XD It's great so far!

::bows to the almightynesses that make Mako-chan fics and love billy joel:: YOU ARE NOT ALONE!
::giggles:: Anyway...great chapter. Can't wait to see where you go with the story. and poor Mako-chan...screawing up so much in the kitchen...and then her friends not even knowing that it wasn't her cooking. Tsk tsk tsk. ^_^

Interesting...more soon.

Hey there. You're holding my interest so far, but i'm still abit confused as to where this is going. Well keep it going and i'll keep reading. Oh and as always, more Makoto please...

WOW! TERRIFIC! Very well written, no spelling errors, great word usage, this is one of the best stories I've read, ever, period. Keep it up!