please please write more soon i can't wait to see how this turns out... :>

CONTINUE PLEASE!! Or type a note when you'll update please? I really love this fic! it was getting interesting!!

Please continue, please, please, please, please, and a thousand more times! Okay, anyway, I liked the part where Watari said Muraki had a little 'Hisoka', I find that funny, I know, it's stupid but I do, anyway, continue!

This is totally awsome! You're going to update right? I've noticed it's been over a year but this is too good to stop writing!! Please update!

Great chapter!! It was simply amazing!! I love the story so far!! I can't wair to se what happens next!! *growls at Muraki* Ebil man!

wa... nice fic... so hisoka is still telephaty boy...

umm, hello... may I inquire as to why you haven't updated this fic? in my opinion, the AU plot is quite original (not to mention REALLY interesting) and should be followed up. so... UPDATE SOON!

PIGGY! when are you gonna update on this fic? cuz itz great and kewl and i wanna know what's next!!

I was a big fan of your Legend of Ometin story back when you were still in the process of writing it. I'm glad to see your storytelling abilities haven't wavered. This fic is incredibly interesting.
The thing I love most, I'd have to say, is Tsuzuki's personality. I love it. ^^ Anyway, can't wait to see what happens.

wen r u gonna update...

update this story soon please? this is such a good story!

*turns to Muraki* You leave Hisoka alone! how can you think of destorying Hisoka!

WHEE! ^_^ I love how this is going so far~! Tsuzuki and Hisoka make an adorable couple~! *hits Inspector Muraki* YOU HURT HISOKA YOU MEANIE! T_T Anyway, I can't wait til ya update! ^-^

Good plot. A rare storyline.
Can't wait to see the next chapter. ^0^
Please keep it up!

Quite good. An occasional grammer mistake here and there though, but ultimately enjoyable

Aw poo ickle Hisoka! Bad Muraki! Grr he should be the one jumping.
Okay so question: Does Hisoka have 'sheilds' for his empathy? In canon he learned how to put them up when he became a Shinigami so... did Muraki teach him, did he learn himself, or did someone else help? Cause I think he'd pass out having to go into a police station a lot (lots of emotions and people).
Nice descriptions, plus a girly Hisoka which is always good in my book ^_~ I can't help it if I want those ukes to be pretty! Ah hem.
Anyway one spelling mistake was in the beginning when you described Watari looking at a mirror, you spelled through "threw". And Watari makes corny jokes -_-
Umm so far so good, although there isnt much to go by, but it's one of the few AUs I've seen that is actually an alterante universe instead of just a 'what if...?' sort of thing. Is the pairing Tsuzuki/Hisoka? Seemed like it... Tsuzuki to the rescue! ^_^
Keep going and update!!
*rere*