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| Bonnie Mizuhara 2005-12-11 ch 1,  | abuseThat was so beautiful... I really liked the idea of it. I like LuciusJames... |
| Cerberusia 2005-12-04 ch 1, | abuseExcellent...beautifully dark, with hints of Gothic romance...I think you should let your fingers have a mind of their own more often...Heh. To put it simply; dark, gothic, slashy, Lucius/James goodness. What's not to love? |
| Evil Windstar 2005-05-16 ch 1, | abusepowerful. dark. oh luv it |
| safire flame 2005-03-09 ch 1, | abusepretty damned good...and that's inspiration for you! never know what's coming out of the talented fingers next! lol...please keep writing~! |
| Pam Marks 2004-06-28 ch 1, | abuseOh my god! This is awesome! You must must MUST continue this. Please! I love this. What's going to happen if anyone ever finds out that James is really alive? How will Harry take it? What kind of mental state is James in? You must write more and fast. |
| yumi-sama 2004-05-23 ch 1, | abusewow that was a great fic in my oppinion. does draco or naracissa know that james is alive? and what did you mean by "After all, even angels lie sometimes." does that mean that james really doesn't love lucious? you should write a sequel. any way byebye, |
| CuriousDreamWeaver 2004-04-13 ch 1, | abuseThat was different from most of the fics I tend to read, but I quite enjoyed it. I thought it was very nicely written with good use of language and imagery. Well done. ^_~ DreamWeaver |
| Quill 2004-03-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseWOW! I never knew that a story can convince me of JP/LM. I look forward to seeing more of your work. |
| Ice And Fire Vanessa 2003-11-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is charming and beautiful... |
| Harmonic Friction 2003-09-29 ch 1, | abuseWhoa.. That was so cool. Really gorgeous. The ending was a big surprise, and Lucius was very freaky- but the whole story was so good. It was interesting. Nice work! I love the line 'The silver chains'. Great! |
| npetrenko 2003-08-14 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful story. |
| Chocolat elf 2003-08-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh. Oh, that was so beautifully bittersweet but surprisingly horrific underneath everything else. I liked the way the line: *His cradle. His beautiful prison.* Refers to the rhyme at the beginning. It was a bit confusing but really, really good all the same. You’re fics are always good *fangirls shamelessly* Where can I buy your writing talent? I want it! Do you think they sell it on ebay? *Huggles James* aw, I know you loved Lily but the slashyness is good! Honest! Ok, I’ll go back to the review now! I like the way you had Lucius refer to James as an angel, the Abusive!Lucius image gets sickening after a while. Why can't people show him as human? Well, you did a great job of that. I was a bit surprised at James' reaction to finding Harry was alive, it wasn’t very… er… he didn’t seem very angry. That’s it. But then none of this really makes sense. It’s not a bad thing though! You know, I’m just about ready to say 'sod it' and read your R rated fics. Gah! I have no self-discipline. And I have decided to stalk you. Muahahahahah! Ahem… Not really. I don’t do those sorts of things. But your LJ is very interesting. Wah. Me want a LJ. Yeah. I’m babbling and I’m bored so I’ll just shut up shall I? I loved this ficlet. I am turning into an angst **. :D ~Chocoalt elf:) |
| ~hallmark 2003-08-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseLoved it, loved it, loved it! Very rare that you find something this -good- on FF.Net. This story was incredibly well written and just... awe-inspiring. You have a brilliant way with words. |
| Crucifyx 2003-07-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery good fic. I enjoyed your version of the characters. |