When Nicole meets Seph, the word is spelled "effiminate", not "effimate". Just some advice.

McDorf? O.o

Besides that, great story so far, like all of yours.

This sounds really good. I'd like to read more, but my comps being lousy right now _

Well... it seems that we now have a good guess as to who's Zelda and who's Link...

I like your style! And the story itself, good characters too. I like the fact that they're not named "Link, Zelda, etc." At first I was apprehensive at the fact that Ganon was once again a corporate king, etc etc, because I thought the idea was sort of old, but it looks like you're doing a great job with it! Keep it up. :)

Interesting...normally I don't like these type of "modernization" type stories, but this one is good, not to mention well-written too.

This is a really good start to a story. Please review mine somtime

Interesting start... Hm... Pure LoZ...

Wonder how this is going to end up...

Another fic, another prologue. I'm starting to think you're addicted to prologues, WFROSE. Can't you just start a story normally, and tell the past from flashbacks, like a normal person?

Maybe Link could be Luke. Works. Write!_

-Steeple3