Damn...This was...emotional. I mean that in the good way. You can actually connect yourself with him and his distress. I have the 'Spider-girl' issue in question, but I must confess that I have not really seen it so much from Peter's point of view. To have it written with such skill is wonderful. It was a real lucky find for me.

Thank you.

This is rather good. High charge with lots of emotions. I don't really know the Spider-Man verse that you're talking about I admit. However, it doesn't really matter because you painted a great pictuer with you're words. I guess I've never really been a fan of Peter haveing kids because they all seem to get his inharentence of the Spider powers. But this is really good though.Very deep.

Cute story! Really well written!

so sweet...*

And yet again you say things that are so obvious, but I was too thick to even notice!
Thanx for being the wise one here!
;b
--
selliya*

Thanx for the helpful hints!
--namarie,
orlandoluv
;b

This rocked. I never had gotten to the part where MJ and Peter had May, and I've nver seen Spider-Girl. Looks like I have to add her to the fic I'll have Spidey in. And her brother, too, maybe.
Thanks for the story.
God bless you.

That is cute. It's different from the others. It's better than a " Mary Jane wanting to be Peter's mistress" stories!

Yay! another Spider-Girl fic! And it's good too! news on the cancelation thing: Mayday's got at least another year before they try to put her on the chopping block again

This is a beautiful, touching story... I love it. ::basks in the warm fuzzies::

A wonderful exposition of Peter's thoughts!!
I never even thought he might be shedding tears for May. I thought it was just from the relief of the birth. It makes great sense. Thanks so much for sharing this!