|Reviews for Amongst the Gangs|
| SummerMoon-WinterSun 2/26/10 . chapter 6
I'm surprised how few stories there are for Gangs of NY. I love the movie!
The detail in the chapters is really well in-depth. Also I like how you add the appostrophes to represent Wallace's Scottish accent... Not many people would go that far!
| sweet-opium-dreamer 3/19/06 . chapter 6
Just when I thought there wouldnt be anymore, I came back just to see, if mabey you had updated! Yay! Yes a bit slow, but I'm glad you're back! I have never seen the movie because every bloody time I ask mum to borrow it out she says no! gr! well, write soon!
ps; I love Wallace's accent!
| Merechan 2/15/06 . chapter 6
LOL! "Eijit!" LOL! Don't u just LOVE that word. New York can rock at some points. I can really picture you living in that time and place.
| Maeko-Nohara 12/7/05 . chapter 3
Yes, that's wonderful news. I'm very happy. Can't wait.
I'm not inspired right now for GoNY, unfortunately. I can only ask again that you review spelling/grammatical mistakes in your new chapter, and fix them in the old ones. However, if you present me with an scenario that you're having difficulty with, now or later, I could be able to help.
| Maeko-Nohara 11/26/05 . chapter 4
Oh, yes, I now realise how long it's been since you've updated... I guess I shouldn't stray so far from the fics at the top of the page in a section that isn't updated very often... still, it'd be wonderful if you didn't give up on this! I know you're still around because you've very recently updated one of your other stories, so would you pick this one up again? :)
| Maeko-Nohara 11/26/05 . chapter 5
I was pleasantly surprised at your handling of so many OCs. This fic has endeared itself to me and I will certainly keep an eye on it. I haven't found something I enjoyed like this in a long time- isn't the best, I'm sure we all know.
You might want to consider investing in a beta reader... one of your more glaring grammatical errors is your punctuation on the end of sentences. It's not a comma, it's a period for the stand alone sentences that don't have '_ said' afterwards, you know? Also, you seem to have a problem with run-on sentences- find good stopping points and add a period/hyphen/whatever so that things flow more naturally. Otherwise this is very good and I'm looking forward to a new chapter. If you need any help please let me know.
| me 9/13/05 . chapter 1
The Lord can come anytime. Be prepared.
| kiki 7/21/05 . chapter 1
Everything else Wallace put in his own bag and tied it closed. All of his fathers other belongings Wallace put back in the bag and tied it closed.
The term 'tied it closed' sounds awkward when you use it a second time in the very next sentence. Also I don't think the journal entries are necessary. It helps to make the reader wonder what's going on in wallaces head after his father dies. The way you have it displayed makes it appear as if he barely cares. (the writing has too much clarity for wallace to be in any sort of pain, which he should be if his father just died.)
| sweet-opium-dreamer 7/1/05 . chapter 5
!YAY! your the best! I havent been on fanfic for ages but when ever I do go on, I always check to see if you've got a new chapter up! I dont mean to brag, but I recon I'd make an excellent Bludget! btw, will there be more blood and gore in the next chapter?(I'm not a sicko or anything, I just like gang battles and stuff!) anyhow, great, long chapter, I hope there'll be many more soon, but thats up to you! luv Anna x
| sweet-opium-dreamer 4/22/05 . chapter 4
Another great chapter! I havnt been on for ages but its good to see that your still writing!Tell me, would you have liked to live like Wallace? I mean, amongst the gangs and all? I would have loved it! I could have made a great pickpocket! And its so cute that you've introduced Sarah into the story! That wasnt a bad chapter at all either! So what exactly is a Scamerhorn? Is it another word for whore?(please dont be angry at me for asking) anyways, update soon! oh, and the names Copper Fizz, but if you want, you can call me Anna. Best wishes mate, and good luck with your story!
| sweet-opium-dreamer 1/9/05 . chapter 3
WOW! you've out done urself again! I just love the way you put so much detail into ur story! its so well edited and the characters are just like real people! you have amazing tallent so please keep writing!
| Trooper 3.6 8/11/04 . chapter 3
Good Gravy, just when i thought you would never update this thing. It was great you even got in the gang fight. please update soon, repeat SOON!
| red-headed-jill 8/7/04 . chapter 3
hey i just luv ur story! eva since i read the first chapter i'v bin hooked! the best bit is that reading ur story is like watchin a movie, cause th way u describe things in it,makes it seem like i'm actually there! anyways keep writing!
| Wolfowitz 7/21/04 . chapter 3
hey!i like i like i like alot!you really got it down pat there!If you need idea's how about Wallace and Frankie run into some other kids and they get in a big fight!or frankie gets captured by a rival gang and wallace has to save him or something?jus email me if you want some other idea's,i like you writing this,its about time someone wrote a good one.
| Grumpy Go-Lucky 7/4/04 . chapter 1
Good start but you use the word 'too' when you should be using 'to'. 'Too' means as well. The normal use is 'to' as in 'He wanted to earn some money.' See what I mean? Only use 'too' when you mean also or as well. The rest of the time use 'to'. Just pointing out incorrect spelling and grammar. Story looks good though.