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Reviews For: Dance With Me

Android Chaos
2006-11-16
ch 1,
abuseChloe, child of darkness, black blade, love and faith...

Senseless? I don't think so. This is a very good depiction of what you did of Chloe and I must commend your story. My brother would wince that it glorifies assasins like Chloe so, but I loved it, so I don't care.

It can be noted that I love Chloe too. =3 Nice.
Sankontessou
2005-06-27
ch 1,
abuseThat was beautiful!! I really liked the flow of it!
ThebigW
2004-09-02
ch 1,
abuseAwesome characterization of Chloe, who, I agree, left us much too soon.
Regards.
W.
uranium
2004-02-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseAw... this is an awesome fic, so wonderfully worded, and Chloe's love for Kirika is just so beautifully portrayed. Great job.
Nekira Sudacne
2003-11-09
ch 1,
abuseIndecribeable. It moved me in a way I have not felt for some time. the imagery is perfect and the thoughts are beautiful. I do belive you have managed capture the true essence of Noir in this Fic.

My poor words do little to praise it.

To give this my customary number rating would be to do it a grave injustice.
Visitor-Ilvinaeda07
2003-08-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseNice imagery...I will say this: I do not know the story of Noir, nor do I know the story behind the works, but I read it anyway, and I think that it was nice. I liked the way you put the thoughts first, however cryptic and eerie it might seem. I like that. I don't know if you read all of my other reviews on your stories, but I believe I reviewed them all so far. i will continue to review as long as you post. Please keep writing!

2003-08-02
ch 1, anon.
abusebravo
cagalli-chan
2003-07-24
ch 1,
abuse'Accept it…please accept it. For my intentions towards you remain pure. There is no blanc dans noir…although I am darkness, it is a crystal black. You will not lose your way.'

My favorite quote and it's absolutely beautiful. You have a way with words that describe the situation perfectly in this fic, plus add to the fact that there are not enough Chloe centered fics here makes this one a rare jewel indeed. Great work. ^_^
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