woah...so good. so ANGSTY! I like angsty stuff!

Hey I really like this stroy :) I never played this game before ( that can be fixed) I'm going to finsh reading it the rest of the stroy then read the second stroy.

*claps* Can't wait to read the next one! I can't wait to learn more about your version of Clara/Gilder... it looks really interesting and like it should have been in the game *grins* Cheers!

Awesome ending. Hope to see more from you.

That's... the end? WHAT? HOW COULD you eND SUCH AN AWSOME STORY? Anyways, if you make some kind of a sequle, that'll be good. Hey, you could be the next Desert Lynx!

Nice ending... Gilder's probably in for "eternal torture" sometime soon after the story, but Clara wouldn't mind a bit! In your next story, it *would* be nice if some chapters didn't fit on my screen, but that's just a suggestion! One thing stands out, though... there was no sign of Urala worrying herself sick at Hans's bedside...

Pretty good, I'll be awaiting the ending. Heh, if only my story got this kind of review support.

Then who was Clara talking about? MORE!

That was shocking. I want to see new chapter soon!

OMINOUS. I like it. It's short, but good. Yet again I submit my request for longer chapters. *salutes with Enrique's sword*

Good! Great! Moved a LITTLE fast sometimes but still good. CONTINUE. Nice bit with Aika attacking Vyse, by the way, reminds me of what happens if you look through the hole in her wall in the beginning of the game.

Another person on the brink of death? Well, the chapters were good.

YEY! Moegi's safe and sound! _. (Did you notice I am obbsessed with Moegi? She's so cool!). Kick Vigoros' butt!

Pretty good. Keep it up.

HI! I just got back from my own vaction and I hope you guys had a good one _! I like the story as usale. Keep it up!