Oh no!

Cool ending!

No, not again! He'd just found her, and now... Anyway, it was a fantastic story, I loved reading it! Thank you for writing! :)

WOW! I KNEW IT! This chapter was great! You had an awesome idea to write this. Thanks! :)

Oh, I LOVE where this is going! Great idea! now, the next chapter! :D

Oh, my God, if I'm guessing right, then... Gotta go, I must read the next chapter or I'll explode! :)

Hm, this was very interesting... I just HOPE that Daniel will NOT get involved with this Ankha... But there's only one way to find out, and it means reading on, so that's what I'll do! :) I can't wait to find out what the "burning horror" actually is...

:O I can't believe it! That was really great! I feel so sorry for poor Daniel though, he was always innocent.

Great Story;

Quezacolt

Daniel stood, a broad smile on his face, and took the hand of the one he’d thought lost forever. “Jack,

Really enjoyed this story.

Though I think you could have extended it quite a bit still it was really good.

this is so good!

you're really talented!

this is going on my faves

kelli

that was a great story, but the ending seemed kinda odd to me. dun let it end so fast! :-P

let me know if u write a sequel, ok?

PLEEASE HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER, IT'S SO GOOD!

This is getting good. I can't wait to see the direction in which you take this. Anyway, thanks for the review you left me :) and I hope to see you update again soon. I'm enjoying this!

oh! interesting, plz plz continue

does Jack eva titoe round sensitive subjects?

This sounds like it could be interesting please continue!

:)