 Eric 1/13/01 . chapter 1 This was very good. I am a big Early Edition fan and I was impressed by this. |
 Janet 12/28/00 . chapter 1 Good Work. A little different style than the others that have been written about this but quite moving I think. |
 Geonn 12/18/00 . chapter 1 Wow. That was... wow... |
 GaryHobson'sFutureWife 12/18/00 . chapter 1 OMG! i love it. it's so sad and angsty and you mad me cry, but it's great. |
 Aurelia Violet 12/18/00 . chapter 1That was awesome! You really went inside what Gary was feeling! Great job! |