I like it, very nice, and a little edgy...I'm actually in anticipation!

please update this story looks fun

Oh, I love this one! Very good written. Please continue!! I wanna know what happens

YEAH! cool, sounds great! continue? :-P

It says I should give a "well rounded review" huh. Well, um...It is a really good story? *confused*

Dud, This is cool! I'm dying to know what happens next! Please write more!

Please Continue!

E! This was an amazing story! Full of surprises. I think it's wonderful! Can't think of anything wrong, so good job! HAND!

no need to burn, very well written, burning if bad, very bad, unless you are haveing fun burning stuff. hehehehhee neway you should continue with this.

This is just a test...

I love the story of her birth. It's beautiful and classic. And your wording goes with the wording of other greek legends. It's a legend and you have to portray it as one whether others think that way or not. Keep going, I would love to hear the man bashing that might come from this. :snicker: Might I suggest Nemesis giving a hand to Hibisca? he goddess of retribution might know some great punishments...