um... the 2nd chapter is the same as the first one... EXACTLY THE SAME as in its the same document. If you could fixit please, i'd be most grateful. And when you do, I look forward on sending in a REAL reveiw.

P.S. the first chapter was REALLY great. But may i point out that you need to start a new paragraph everytime a person speaks. Not saying you were horrible or anything, just pointing things out that I thought needed fixing. Anyways, I look forward to updating Ja Ne