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| star7166 2006-09-25 ch 1, | abuseinteresting |
| Nienna Telrunya 2006-03-14 ch 1, | abuseOoh, good. Very, very good. Powerful, too. You have definitely captured a tricky little bit of character. Congradulations. |
| good omens 2005-12-12 ch 1, | abuseI can visualise this so well. You're an awesome writer; I loved it. |
| Sable3733 2005-09-20 ch 1, | abuseThat was... unexpectedly good. I'm surprised I enjoyed your Severus so much. The man deserves some peace, and despite having slightly mellowed, he's still unequivocably Severus. Harry was Harry, as well: cheerfully impudent, but distant unless pried. Nice writing style, too. It flowed well. Overall, pretty much prefect. Great job. |
| Masako Moonshade 2005-08-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is...wow. I'm not sure what to say about it. It's very good, for sure. And very real. So by now, Harry's forgiven Severus. And... Your style is amazing. I am deeply impressed. |
| Elbereth 2005-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is one of the most amazing fics I have read. It got me sitting, staring into space when I'd finished. It feels real. Harry and Severus are real, and I could picture the location vividly although the description is minimal. Thank you, it was a pleasure to read. |
| totallystellar 2005-03-15 ch 1, | abuseOne of the best one-shots I've ever read! Awesome, insightful, wonderful Harry and Snape interaction. ^_^ Five stars, my friend. ^_^ *click click favorites* |
| topps 2004-12-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was a really good story! |
| jezowen 2004-11-25 ch 1, | abuseExcellent, simply excellent. Whether Discworld or Potter, the ideas you present and the characterisations you write are pitch-perfect. It is writers like you that make me want to keep reading fanfiction, that lure me to dig through the dross to find the Really Good Ones. I notice you haven't posted any more stories recently - if you still have the time and the desire to tell them, please write (and post) some more! |
| Lil Miss Potter 2004-11-24 ch 1, | abuseaw, i loved that, it was so...right. i think youve got it spot on there. well doen katie xx |
| Augustine 2004-07-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseLovely, original, refreshingly gen. I liked adult, well-balanced Snape meeting coltish Harry, still trying to come to terms with who he is. Harry's comment about actually finishing to see the world in five years' time was hilarious; Snape's comment about Hermione was really cruel. Uh, and why is it that JKR, and fanfic writers after her, have their characters abuse books like that? In CoS Hermione, the great book lover, had "Most Potente Potions" wet and splotchy by taking it into the loo the trio used as a lab, instead of copying the instructions; and here we have Snape writing at the margins of, apparently, an old manuscript that doesn't belong to him! Why? But that's just an aside :-) Thanks for a lovely story! |
| Jetamors 2004-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseI can see Snape and Harry talking like this, after time and circumstances lessened their hatred for each other. And I can see Harry traveling all over the world, looking for some place where he can understand himself. He reminds me of Ender Wiggen in this, if you've read any of Orson Scott Card. |
| Mr. Towel 2004-01-18 ch 1, | abusethis is realy good, Im sorry, but i have an ulterior motive in writing this review, as you may, or may not know, I am attempting to get a discworld fanfiction book published, and I would be honoured if i could put in some of your little fanfictions which fill in gaps a lot of people have thought about, and I would be more greatley honoured if you'd write something new for it as well. could you please put your reply in a review to my page which explains it all, to get to it just click on my name, then its the one at the top of my 'stories authored' page |
| ScullyMulder4ev 2004-01-05 ch 1, | abuseI loved this! Very good writing, it was very touching. I love what Snape had to say about what Harry was searching for. Very good idea and very original! |
| ihadanepiphany 2003-10-23 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting and thought inducing. And much liked |