Nice... awesome story. Good job.
L8er.
~ShadowAddi

Its good.I want there to be more chapters please!!

That was a really good story. Is there going to be anymore chapters? I want to know what happens after the battle.

very very... umm... what's the word? Gory, bloody, nasty, and etc. i can think of a lot of good words to describe ur story. i think the whole fic was excellent!