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| Ahria 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abuseHow did I miss this story of yours?! I really liked it! I thought Zel was really IC. |
| Dreamsinger 2003-10-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseInteresting--I don't think anyone's ever bluntly said 'You never lost your humanity' to Zel--it makes it seem as if his problem isn't so big, doesn't it? Ja ne, Dreamsinger |
| bnniesmenolikey 2003-08-02 ch 1, | abuse*applauds* Very nice use of a great song. I love Matchbox 20 ^^ I really like this fic. I love Zel introspectives, cause he's such an interesting character, and I like this very very much! ^^ You have a great talent for writing! I shall go read more! Shame on DS for not reviewing and reading sooner! |
| Earth Star 2003-07-24 ch 1, | abuseWow! Great story. I really like how you used the memory flashes. |
| deep sea dolphin 2003-07-24 ch 1, | abuseWritten fluently and in character. Good use of past recognisable scenes from the anime. "Unwell" also happens to be one of my favourite songs, but mostly for its lyrics. |