I am extremely fond of Eshu. He's very philosophical. Holds an intelligence very similar to Zel, only Zel had to hear it spoken from someone else. ^^ Kinda reminded me of Xellos a bit, but the guitar made me think of Zel. At any rate, I loved him. I'd like to see his character again, actually.

This was awesome!! Go, Zel! Go to Amelia!

~ Umbrae

How did I miss this story of yours?! I really liked it! I thought Zel was really IC.

Interesting--I don't think anyone's ever bluntly said 'You never lost your humanity' to Zel--it makes it seem as if his problem isn't so big, doesn't it? Ja ne,
Dreamsinger

*applauds* Very nice use of a great song. I love Matchbox 20 ^^ I really like this fic. I love Zel introspectives, cause he's such an interesting character, and I like this very very much! ^^ You have a great talent for writing! I shall go read more! Shame on DS for not reviewing and reading sooner!

Wow! Great story. I really like how you used the memory flashes.

Written fluently and in character.
Good use of past recognisable scenes from the anime.
"Unwell" also happens to be one of my favourite songs, but mostly for its lyrics.