I hope you'll write more. This story is getting far too interesting!

Please update! I've been following this story for months, except I haven't bothered to review yet... Bad me. I love this! Your characters are very beleivable.

You updated! Because of...me?
*grins stupidly*
I'd be lying if I said that seeing this update on my favorites list didn't make my day!
Another flawless chapter,too... ^_^ Thanks for writing such a wonderful story!

I love it! I feel I must inform you that your writing is absolutely captivating ^ ^ Please, please update!!

w00t That was awsome..totally cool good job!! I tried clapping my hands right after the fight scene between my two fave charas and Im paying dearly for it now, I fractured some of the bones in my right hand the other day and I keep forgetting. You know how hard it is to type one handed!! oh well this will teach me to stay away from angry ex boyfriends and truck doors! lol It was an accident I assure you! LoL

Swet!!
it sounds so much better now! I knew you could do it!!.

Hey the story is coming along great hope the sixth chappie doesnt, take too long. :) I promise not to hurt myself this time so I wont take so long to beta it. Check out my profile I am shamelessly promoting this story...:P

Hey yo... Whats up love the story so far its great. MAJOR Predator fan here, I know pretty much all that there can be known. I can even do the predator clicking noise :) Still trying to memorise their Alphabet (hard) But n e way, U said that you needed a Beta, I could help if you wanted, but if you need any help with n e thing Predator or Alien wise just gimme a Mail...(sounds weird)
akira_jez@hotmail.com

Heh, first, I just want to say that I feel very special for being mentioned...
And now I want to say that that chapter was good as well...even for a character introduction chapter. I believe you when you say it will pick up, and I know I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it going. Later, and good job.

Hey, I just read that prologue you have written here, and for some reason I was compelled to review it. Probably cause I am a huge alien/predator fan but...that is besides the point. I really enjoyed even just this small beginning part. It looks like it has potential to be something really good.
Oh, and another thing, it looked, to me that is, that this group of Predators is working on their own agenda and not neccessarily following the rules of their people...which is cool and an interesting way to take it...ok, I am just rambling now, it happens. Sorry for wasting your time. Keep up the good work and get another chapter for this story out. Later.