Wow.I love it!I thought it was great!Why did you stop?Are you going to make it longer?I hope you do because I thought it was great.I can't believe that I haven't read this fanfic yet because I thought it was great.Keep up the good work.Hope you read mine.
-Nikki

like the story!

i liked it it has a good beginning that could make a really interesiting story i hope the writer continues her work id like to see how Anguis makes out and to see why Jack was looking for her