This is the first fanfic I've ever read...and its been 4 yrs so I give up.

*squwell* That was so cute :D I love it ^^ tehe.

I love this story! Please upDATE!

Other than the fact that i love your story there were a few errors, like you used the word 'been' when i think and i say i think it should have been 'being' lol but yea! UPDATE PUHLEAZE!!

Please update soon i'm dying to read what happens next!

^_^ i love it so far
i know its been 2yrs but i cant wait 4 more
take ur time either way

uhm uhm i love yer story iyt so good update? almost been two years..

please update soon ne

I forgot to add the story to my favorites/Alert list! ::hugs:: I ADORE your story, and update when you get the chance, alrighty?

My friend Rosey loves this story too, and wants you real bad to update! ^_^

yea! i'll go on hunger strike too!! plz update! i need more, more, more, MORE! UPDATE!

I demand that you write more. I shall go on a hunger strike. until you do.
j/k...i could never give up food...hehe
try to write more soon though, if you are able to please

Wow, evil Cloud is sexy. lol
Can't wait to read more ;-)

luv this story!

Holly crap 6 versions? Damn that's a lot. As for what I think...I think you should do the Kingdom Hearts ending, cuz its a whole lot nicer and sweeter. On the other hand, FFVII was also cool/vague...wait what am I talking about? Bad, Lei, bad!! *hits myself on head*

oh...owie...*rubs aching head*

Uh anyway, now I know you should do the Kingdom Hearts ending cuz if I say the FFVII ending, I'll hurt myself doing it again...T_T

Update soon okay?! Ja ne!
~BFM

Good job (again)I'm still gonna read da next chapter so you better hurry nd update the chapter after the next, k? Ja ne!

~BFM

Awesome chappie. Keep doing a great job, I'm sure this story'll be one of the best I've read ever! Anyways, it's awesome the way you made Sephiroth and Cloud brothers. Are they reallie? Huh...whatever, I'm still reading your recently updated story so...yeah...Ja ne!
~BFM