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| ladysherlock92 2004-10-07 ch 12, anon. | abusethe plot was going great. I felt bad for Obi, Qui and Tahl. But the ending is weak and abrupt. It seems rushed. I hate sad stories. But this was a good read. |
| Green Leader 2004-06-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThrilling! Love how Obi-Wan blasts the ships! Will Qui-Gon ever find Obi-Wan? |
| Kynstar 2004-04-02 ch 12,  | abuseGreat!! I juz read this story and the one prior, I loved it!! But curious to know if this is where you left it off? Or is there another sequal that I missed? Definitely curious as to how Qui takes seeing Obi with Dooku hehehe Excellent form with Dooku :D Did a good job with all the characters!! Do tell if there is another story that I missed dealing with these 2 stories. THANKS! |
| Melyanna 2004-02-10 ch 4, anon. | abuseJust to let you know part three for your story (Knowing and Proving)isn't posted here. I was reading your story here instead of on jafd simply becase it's easier and realized something was amiss. I am sure others would appericate having the middle of the story avaliable. hehe, don't worry, it happens to the best of us. An avid reader and fan, Melyanna PS. Just realized I forgot...Love the story. Not normally into AU but I cant seem to stop reading. It's annoying me that I got online to get the middle from jadf and am suddenly finding myself writing this...I'm going to go finish reading now. |
| Seung Mina6 2004-02-06 ch 11, | abuseI really loved this story. You are gonna do a sequel are you? |
| Bloody Dead Rose 2003-12-28 ch 9, | abuseAmazing, you have to update soon! |
| Seung Mina6 2003-12-25 ch 9, | abuseOMG! Tahl is dead! OMG! How sad. *sniffs* Where's my tissue? :'( |
| drowchild 2003-10-25 ch 8, anon. | abuseYAY! Updated! ^^; Poor Obi-wan... I'll be waiting [impatiently] for more. |
| drowchild 2003-10-21 ch 7, anon. | abuseIsh good! -cackles and evil dark side takes over- KILL! CORRUPT OBI-WAN! TURN HIM BADDIE! -poofs back. coughs- Eh, can't wait to find out what happens when Qui-Gon and everyone find out that Obi-wan is doing the killing and stuff... MORE! |
| Seto's Mistress from Hell 2003-09-27 ch 7, | abusePoor Obi. It really wasn't his fault, and now that meanie Dooku's taking advantage of him. What a jerk... anways, please continue! |
| Seto's Mistress from Hell 2003-09-27 ch 6, | abuseErhem. I'm glad you didn't kill Qui, though I almost wet myself because of it LOL Anyways, this is a really great story. I'm beginning to see how the Republic will fall... |
| Seto's Mistress from Hell 2003-09-27 ch 5, | abuseAH! Qui-Gon can't die, you can't let him die! And even worse, Obi with Dooku, and Maul's here, and... oh, my god, you just can't kill Qui! |
| Seto's Mistress from Hell 2003-09-27 ch 4, | abuseWho has Obi? Where is he? When will that stupid terrorist die? |
| Seto's Mistress from Hell 2003-09-27 ch 3, | abuseI should have known it was Sifo-Dyas. Great story so far. |
| Seto's Mistress from Hell 2003-09-27 ch 2, | abuseOh. She was pregnant! Okay, that makes sense, sorta. Poor, Obi. Been chasing the bugger for so long. |