I have tears in my eyes. That was beautiful.

I'm still on my kick of re-reading your stories and I looked at your reviews and noticed I never reviewed for this story when it first came out. So I'm going to now. This was a awesome little short story thing, sad but great. So Kai's kids name was Charlene too?

Sincerely,
Alexis

God... I am so emotional!! That actually brought tears to my eyes... but it was a good one shot fic, although it was depressing! I really need to work on my emotions... lol...

i'm too lazy right now to sign in. it didn't make me cry, but i can understand why Kai would. having the one person you love, die because you couldn't get to them in time to save them. how heart breaking! i like the ghost at the end. she's still there, loving him right back. it fits, but i don't know where it'd go if you tried to put it into CTS. perhaps here is best. but you all ready know that don't you? that's why you put it here. all in all, it's sweet.
~*~Agent DragonEye signing off~*~

not bad for an angst fic. keep writing.

-sheesh- u call this somber and pain-filled...neh!
i dun wanna insult...but i hav seen a more 'angst' story...
it is vry sappy i think...u noe little love stories...
if there is a character-death story...it wld seem nicer it is written in the dying person pov
it wld seem...more touching...
xcept if u write it until it seem all so...girly...dunno how to put...
like 'i noe i m dying, but don't worry,our love will last forever...'
u noe...tt sorta crap...

My, that was sad demon ;_;
Sorry for the fight too, goomen. but I can say that this is so kawaii and I love it. Poor Kai, poor all of us. >< wah, don't ever die!
Angsty ficcy though, yet good. ^^
again, gomen. ;_;