Great story! I really love how you captured his accent! You should go back and mark it complete though. I didn't know whether or not to add it to story alert until I saw "The End." Lol

WOW. That was awesome. I really cried when Dan didn't even get a chance on Bess in the book and that his feelings were unrequited. It's heart-warming to find something like this. :D Good job.

aw... too sweet;0)

I could totally imagine this happening! Great story :)