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KiraDN
2004-05-16 . chapter 1
Yay! ^_^ Sorry for not being constructive, but I don't wanna! This is kewl!
Dancer of Death
2003-12-29 . chapter 1
WAIWAI! I love this! It's kewl!! I wanna know what happens next! Come on come on come on come on! DESTROY THE AMAZONS! KILL THE TENDOS! GO HERB, RAN, AND SAFFY-CHAN! GO GO GO! BWA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!
DRAGON SLAVE AKANE! KICK HER #*($(*&@#(*@#(*&$ *#$(* ! CONTINUE THE *censored due to language* STORY!
cloud
2003-10-12 . chapter 1
Have Ranma beta up Akane! And Shampoo, and Ukyo, etc. Then Genma, and Happosai. MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
They should all go to HELL!
Psi-Neko
2003-10-01 . chapter 1
Can you continue this? Please! I mean there are so few stories where Ranma dicides to leave Or at least with Saffron and/or Herb's help. So Please CONTINUE!
star
2003-09-23 . chapter 1
Yeah! Akane and hte others are too obssessive. They're not good for Ranma. Is this story shonen-ai? I really don't care either way, as long as the plotline is good, the grammar and structure is readable, and there are no Mary Sues or blatant self-insertations.
Lord of the Pit
2003-08-16 . chapter 1
I bow to you for writting a dam good story. i look forward to reading more chapters of this fan fic.
dearest
2003-07-28 . chapter 1
ok well there were some grammatical errors that could be worked with but regardless it was great. i love the plot and the storyline (arent they the same?) oh well very cool i cant wait to see where this story is going and how the plot advances! YAY!*ahem* very good please update soon?
Xiao Xing
2003-07-28 . chapter 1
very interesting... please update!
Lifeweaver
2003-07-27 . chapter 1
An 'Uberranma solves all problems and ditches his abusive family'. Nothing wrong with the premise though the execution needs work.

You need WAY more transitions. Unless he litteraly goes insane it is way OOC for him to ditch everyone like that. Maybe he gives them some tests to change. Make it clear how he JUSTIFIES breaking a decade of conditioning (his honor).

Why are Herb, Saffron, Hiniko and the others helping him? He may or may not have left them on amicable terms but selflessly helping someone who defeated them makes no sense.
Ryudo Ray
2003-07-25 . chapter 1
i love this story more please
jh
2003-07-24 . chapter 1
Ranma,Saffron,Herb a true three man army I cant wait to see where you go with this I hope you continue soon.
TetsuoTsubushi
2003-07-24 . chapter 1
This story is really good. I want to see more of it so do that.
Kinai
2003-07-24 . chapter 1
Did you know that you dont acept unsigned reviews?? well. Now you know.

The story is interesting in its way. I think that you dislike made a few OOC various of the characters, but you are the author.

Ah other thing. When i clicked the link of your page the url was messed with the url of fanfiction. Perhaps you must put http before the url.

Well. Perhaps i am a few stupid but could you explain me the warning of your page??

Overall if this one is other fanfic that forget the lacks of Ranma and we find a Superranma against everybody (and win) or is a more interesting story (at least in my opinion) we need see the next chapters.
By now this story is good.

Well thanks for your time.

Kinai.

P.D:This is only my opinion. No offense wanted.
CRose
2003-07-24 . chapter 1
oh sure, make me login.

Heh, finally posted this, huh? Looks good, I want to see where you are going from here. Since even I haven't seen beyond this chapter.

:)
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