Christina, this story is so awesome. I love you take on the two years, and I really wish it had happened this way on the show.

Hmm... that was a chapter to cause thought... I love their conversation, the admiting of grudging respect... good to see that :)

Woot! Great update! I really don't care of Allison was set up. lol I don't like her! :D I can't wait to find out how Sydney's doing!

That was absolutely amazing. They are all so in character..if only this was how the show went. I love the Sarkney-completely believable and within the realms of Alias. Great job!

CONTINUE! I want more Sarkney! Right now!

Love this story!. please please update soon. I really like the way you have managed to segue into hong kong.

Ann

Thank you Sarky boi! Shut down Irina!

Kyewl...SKIPPEE!Sloane's dead!

He is, isn't he?

/Excellent, really, how well he was living up to his training. Out for nearly a day, and wounded nowhere serious./ I laughed at that... Just the image of him mentally beating himself up for loosing blood and getting knocked out for a period of time, nevermind that us "normal folk" would have been out a helluva lot longer... The man is nuts, but that's why we love him :)

/Sark has seen death. But never, never in a thousand times, has he seen death like this./ *shivers* Okay, that has to be like, the creepiest line in all of Alias ff. *shivers again* Now I'm going to sound like I'm three and ask "What? Why? What happened? Why can't I see, Mommy?" *grin*

What the? You can't stop there! It's illegal! I really, seriously hope you're secretly holding onto another chapter... one that you're going to post really soon... Pwetty pweaze? With a cherry on top? *sigh* Great chapter. ;)

well that can't be good. nope, nu-uh, not at awll. heehehee, he doesn

t die does he? because i would just cry if that happened. and why can't u write smut? im only 14 and i do! o well, if u don't u don't.

i like bunches! write more plz!

NO

Where did Sydney go? Was it the CIA, and she escaped wit tem? The Covenent and they captured her! please hurry up!

NO!

I was getting so into it, and then you just ENDED IT?

Update soon!

It started out beautifully, and now I'm in a panic... blackout bad! Oy... here I was all hopeful that it would all be wonderful and happy and here comes another (Sloane I'm sure) plot twist... evil! Talk about not having time to stop and smell the roses of life... yeep.

As for you being fourteen and therefore not giving us smut, I'd say you're pretty right in that... and you know what? You write pretty damn well for a 14-year-old... I'm impressed :)