...i cried

Very beautiful and unique story, I love your elegant writing style. I somehow am at a loss of words right now. The whole story was so touching and the end so peaceful.

Thank you for such a fabulous work!

I don't know if I could have done anything better than spent my time reading this fic before I went to bed. All I can say right now is this was one of the most brilliant Crystal Tokyo stories I have ever read. Your writing style is so easy to read, yet shows so much maturity. I might have been a little biased, being an Usagi/Mamoru fan myself, but I think anyone - and everyone - should read this jewel you've given us. Thank you so much for writing this, and I'm sorry this is such a sloppy review; I'm really at a loss of words to describe how this has impacted me. Amazing. Terrific. Absolutely brilliant. Fantastic job.

Oh my god...that was so said :'( It was really good though, and it was the only fanfic that ever made me cry before.

I am crying when i read your story... i love it.

That was breathtakingly beautiful. You've turned death into a thing of beauty. I imagine you put a lot of thought into this. I can tell because there was flow and elegance to it all. I could picture the disorder and bloody deaths, but the two things that really stuck to my brain was the death of Serenity and the death of Endymion. You're very powerful interpretation of 'the end' was better than the beginning (by beginning I mean the whole sailor senshi/tuxedo kamen era). I enjoyed the way you weaved the past into the present. Very eloquent, yet sad, yet sweet. I couldn't ask for more from you. Thank you for writing something so wonderful.

gosh this is the first fanfic that has ever made me cry

well done. your a fantastic writer.

x

You made me tear up with this - it pulled on all of my heartstrings.

Absolutely beautiful and spellbinding - a story worthy of the love it describes, and that is the best praise I can give.

That was one of the best stories of Sailor Moon I've ever read! Usually I don't like stories with Usagi or Mamoru ending dead but yours was captivating. I liked most the story where they died trying to protect their kingdom but both were well written. It's a pity that you had to remove the lyrics, I didn't get the chance to read them.

This story was fabulous. I loved it! It's probably the best fanfic I've read about Serenity and Endymion. Just a bit of constructive critism: You describe how Mars died, but you weren't that detailed about the deaths of the other Senshi. Also, the two story idea was great, but I totally got confused when I first read it because I didn't realize when the second story started and when it ended. But overall, I would give this story 5 stars. It was well written and creative. First kind of fanfic I've seen ever! Kep on writing!

Amazing story. I like how it was two different stories. I found myself crying as well... but only for the story where usagi died first. I don't know why, but it struck me as so much sadder. Wonderful story . You have a gift my friend. Keep up the good work!

truly amazing, i think both of them are extremely perfect
though i believe the fighting death is how each and everyone of them would go, saving all tht they held dear

i love this story, it is amzing, i was crying too
u are an amazing writer

This was beautiful! I'm so totally crying right now... OMG, so fantastic...

This is the most beautiful thing I have EVER read. I mean... just.. there are no words.

I know you would like constructive criticism but as far as I'm concerned this is perfect.