You completed the sequel before this one?

Summon giant monkeys who know Kung-Fu!

lol this is getting better by the minute...i mean chapter!xD
kid...ur scary when the cookies get hurt..OO*hides*

o_O i feel as tho for every thought after and attack, a hyuga dies...

i like the idea of your story, and some of the things in it, but your story is VERY confusing, it jumps around too much, is possable for you to organise it better? also, while battle scenes are interesting, it get's really boaring if there are too many of them to fast.

i do like the idea of the story, but because it's to confusing to try and keep up with all the groups (which is made harder by the fact that you can visit each group 3 or more times, it's VERY confusing and frustrating) i'm not sure if i like the story or not. again, it is a good attempt, but the confusing aspects are a bit much.

lastly, you sometimes go one about a technique but then don't explain it (there is a part when kakashi yells some jusus and sasuke says "what is that jutsus?" but then you move on and don't mention it again, you don't even say what it does or what happens with it)

again, i like it, but too confusing and to hard for me to keep up with.

i really like your story please update the sequel soon

a new team for naruto huh good

Funny how even when someone is correcting someone else they still manage to get it wrong. *cough*bumike99*cough*

It is Kurenai. Not Kurunai or Kuenai.

Other then that I love this story!

Great Stroy although why did Naruto kill Mishu? O yea you are spelling Kuenai's name wrong...

I like this story a lot! Great job, and the attacks you made up are awesome, the storyline too! I'll be reading the second book now, cha!

hehe i printed out the first 7 chapters of this ... i would say atleast 2 1/2 years ago and I've finally found it again and can finish it (and the other 2 sequels you wrote, pleasant surprise :) )

hey, great story. uh, chapter 2 is the first chapter that's posted and chapter 1 is the 2nd chapter posted...might want to fix that. hehe

laterz

You made the Bunshins stronger than the Kage Bunshins... Bunshin is just a distraction, no more solid than the air! Other than that, nice chapter...

O.o Wonder what will happen in the next book.