Nice work.

Hey this is a great story. I usually don't read x-men that much, but i just finished rereading Spring of Drowned Miyah and i thought i give this a try! Man i love that one a lot to. I'm confused though in your profile it said you uploaded chapter 4 of that but ther is only 3... Well anyways keep up the work on both, i'll be waiting.

great update soon

I LOVE THIS STORY... The character discription is a bit unclear though... I mean a mutant's shape is supposed to look natural, right. Like kurt...Also why'd you make the character dislike her form so much? I mean I can understand why she hates being a mutant but why'd you have to make her look like that? Ps, could you send me a scetch of what you wanted her to look like? I'm curious...

very cool

YAYNESS!

Hiya! That was a great chapter! The action was awesome! I loved it! Hey, i have a request to ask for you. Can you check out my fic 'Warped'? It's an X-men evo fic too. it's about, well, being warped into the Evo universe too!^_^

Hey, i finished the picture! Well, I finished drawing it. i haven't colored it though because i drew it in my art book and I never color in my art book. I always photo copy it first so if i mess up, i can just copy it again and start over. Plus, i have the original sketch so noone can steal the work. Anyways, i'll probonly get it to you by... say...sunday or monday because that's when I'm going over to my friend's house.

Well, i must leave you now. Farewel; abayo.

*Turns into a murder of crows and flies away.*

:O :O! sabertooth is dead?!?! wuts gonna happen now. hurry up. im likin this a LOT. kay.. buh byee. ^_^

Hopefully, these batch of muffins are the bouncey rubbery kind and not the brick tile-breaking kind!^_^ Just kiddig.

Anyways, nice chapter. Poor Sabey... i almost feel pity... but seeing as that is not a possible emotion for demons to feel... well... i care not to loiter in the thought. And i also care not to linger for too long and share my bordome due to it's infectious affects. So I shall cary on. Farewell;abayo.

*Bows and turns into a pile of spiders that disolve into shadows*

YAY! I LOVE HER MORPH! at first I thought her code name was going to be 'flying squirrel' and was about to kill you, I'm glad it's not, Myst is so much cooler

Great job! You got the characters down pat! I recognized all their personalities! So many times i see they're so ooc. Well, anyway, i await your next chapter (and i'm almost done with the pic^_^) so I bid you farewell; abayo *turns into a pile of spiders and scampers into the shadows*

HAHAHA! Oh, man! That's hilarious! I coudn't imagion the embarassing thoughts that would be going through my head while using a whole bottle of shampoo! Oh, man, that was great! Keep it up. Now i'm off to see the next chapter. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *bursts into a murder of crows and flies away*

AWESOME! O, sounds a little, mysterious?^_~ I await your next upload! *bows and disappears in a murder(flock) of crows*

O. Nice name. I love the outfit! I think i'll draw her! Did i tell you i draw! Yeah, i draw in anime. i think I'll draw her cos she's so cool! Let's see if i got the details right.

Red hair-midback
Blue eyes
Black-animalistic nose
red body fur
Darker red tail
the folds of skin are a red color
dark blue bady suit w/ rings on sides.
Black cloth that attaches to front and back-ankle length.
Black ankle-high boots.
Dark blue cape with hood.
black leather gloves.

That right? i hope so, gotta read the next chappie!^_^

oh NO! That's an EVIL power! NO!