OK.. this i s really sweet! Especially the Love between Adam and Eve, the burden of choice!! please continue!! YOU HAVE TOO!! your doing a great job 1 hehhehhe :)

This is quite good...there've been numerous takes on this, but this one tops them all, imho. I love the way the knowledge makes her see more of the beauty...and an interesting take on Lucifer, as well. Very well-done.

~lyv

Oh, and to just breathe: you do realize that Jesus is guilty of making up his own religion? like he was the only person in the entire world who's right? If it's ok for him, why not for anyone else?

Simple, simple man... Very well portrayed.

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Nice perspective, sounds a little bit like mine--but not. Teehee.

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This is a fantastic story! Very interesting take on a well-known Bible story. You should be proud of it. You did an excellent job.

~Liz

My goodness, certainly you don't think everything that is different from the Bible offends us Christians? If you were preaching Ozzy Osborne was God from a pulpit with dead goat's skull strapped to your head I might...but that's an extreme situation...and it'll probably will never happen so we don't have to worry about it.

Anyway, I found it very intriguing. I never thought of Eve being able to sing before, but it's a pleasant thought to dwell on. You're very creative, but I guess that musical helped, eh?

I thought it was very beautiful, as a fiction story goes, and I'm glad you don't believe it, but treat it as fiction. Too many people make up stories which are just twisted Bible ones and then go on believing them and stating they're the truth. I mean all the power to figuring out what is right and wrong in your own mind, but making up your own religion...it just seems wrong. Like how could you be the only person in the entire world who's right, you know what I mean? Anyway, I liked it, and I'm one of those die-hard Christian-types. Keep up the good work!