Wow, that was long. Staying up to read it to this point. But quite good. I really like the plot, and it's really interesting how you wove the events of KH together from Cloud's and Seph's POVs.

I read this story years back, when it was first published. When I went a-hunting for it this afternoon, you should be pleased to know I was ecstatic to still find it up online! I just wanted to let you know that I've always been a fan of your work, and this piece is probably my all-time favorite fanfiction. Ever.

Thanks for being so awesome, sweetie~

Whenever the 'on hold'/hiatus thingy ends: ;-; zomg more plz?

You should finish this! T__T
And add a little SephirothxLeonxCloud threesome in there and fulfill Cloud's fantasy! ^_^
That would make me happy! Lolz

wow.

Wow, thats just so...wow.
Amazing!
I just love everything, can't get enough of it.
Especially the citrus/smutty parts. *wink wink*
Gotta have some more of those. :D
Yeah, so basically, you blow my mind with your awesomeness and I bow down to you because you are unbelievably amazing! *bows*
Thank you so so much!
Please continue writing because I just love your fanfics and would probably die without them.
I thoroughly enjoyed every single bit of it, and can't wait for more!

Loads of love;
hanabananna

P.S.
I hope I don't sound like a crazy person who is obsessed with you and creep you out. I just haven't read any fanfics that can compare to yours because lets face it, their story lines are worth crap, and you are my savior. :]

Excellent job so far ;) I look forward to reading the next chapter ^^

I am proud to say I read all seventeen chapters! -cheers- Usually I dislike reading long fics all at once. -.-;; But this one was verry interest. -nodnod- Great job! *gives you inspirational-mind-controlling-makes-you-continue cookies*

Jen~ you needs to write moar.

I doubt you even come on here any more, since you're account seems quite inactive, but I don't want to bug you on you're LJ about this. :/ (I'm just a girl who loves your writing...)

(also, last I knew SDS was down, why so? I was away from LJ so maybe I messed it, as you're on my f-list from a long while back, but I quite miss your site. Oh well, I wont bug you. I'll read though your LJ sometime and see if I missed something. Although I cant promise I wont bother you there, for I very much love this fic. xD)

How much money do you want...to finish this fic! It is so good!! $20...? >.> um...? XD

I love it!! Poor Leon!! I just can't understand how ppl can take something that was supposed to be used to help them as a bad thing!! ... Actually, I can, so nvm!! Freakin' hatred btw Leon and Seph!! I wanted some threesome!! There is always having Cloud withdrawl sex unless Seph decided to get along with the lion!! I wish you would update!!

Wow. This story rocks my world and you haven't updated it in more than two years...WHERE IS THE UPDADTE?

Cool. Please continue!

Hmm... I always thought that Sephy-chan was about a rough ten years older than Cloudy-kins... See, I do the math like this: Vincent was about 28-29, maybe 30 when Lucreta was pregnant, and he's about 60 when Cloudy was hitting 20 because he spent an odd thirty years sleeping... So, 60 years - his age(~30) = Sephiroth's age (30) meaning Sephiroth was somewhere around 30-32 around the time that Cloud was 19-21. *grin* But that's just my reasoning. Unless Vincent was older than that, but he still ended up sleeping the thirty years so... *shrugs* It still holds.

...*pouts* Aww... You haven't updated in two years... can you try to? at least a little? Even if it is really really slowly, I REALLY cannot wait to see what happens next! ^^ *grin* I REALLY, REALLY, REALLY, *REALLY* like this story. ^^ It made me smile and laugh a lot. ^^ I hope your problems pass. ^^ *waves*

Awesome update soon please!