I would have liked more actual snogging, but you know, that was sweet.

wow. That was good. I really liked the way you wrote it, you have a way with words and emotions. Good Job and the title is cool also

Awe-some.

I love your characterization and all the funny little lines. My favorite: "Sirius wondered why he always thought of food when Remus came to mind and decided it was either because he just liked food, or because Remus never seemed to eat enough of it."

My problem with the Remus and Sirius pairing has been mainly that fanfic seems to ignore how Sirius and James in canon come off as the privileged, inseparable pair, with the other two always somewhat on the outside -- Remus less so than Peter, but still a junior partner all the same. I like that you actually acknowledged that in this story, but believably showed those relationships changing because of Lily.

And on top of all that, just a darn fun read!

Oh, and Remus, dear, "maraud" is indeed a word.

GUH.
That was lovely. I especially liked that not much -happened- between RL and SB...the dynamic just...was.
Yippee!

Aww, this story's adorable. I love your characterization, too. Very well done.

incredible cute! and very good characterization

It's the... with... and not... didn't do... none...
Ah, bollocks!
GO SLASH! (R/S best HP pairing tho^_-&)

^_^ This was the first fic in which it was SIRIUS who admitted to batting for another team, not Remus, and it was very well done. Congratulations.
Asuka Chan

"I know you can keep a secret," Sirius huffed. "I was just saying that to let you know that this was a secret and therefore ought not be told."

"Oh, well, in that case, I'll make every endeavor to keep this one to myself," Remus promised, nodding solemnly.

I loved those lines! Great character interaction and believable dialogue. *grin* Good job. *hands you a cookie*

-Nakki

This was brilliant. Just the way I see the relationship between the marauders having been. This is what fan fic should be.

Lovely, natural dialogue, great sense of humor, touching and hopeful. Thanks so much for this.

Lovely! Nice dialogue, it seems very natural and much like the way I imagine Sirius and Remus would talk at that age.

I like the way you fit in the reference to the incident with Snape, it doesn't interrupt the story yet it seems important to include.

And I love when Remus says "Ask me again later," - a great hint of hope for the future.

Hm . . . Interesting story, and I like the way that Sirius has a bit of feeling for both James and Remus, because typically you just see him having several dozen girlfriends and then deciding in a moment of clarity that he's mad in love with Remus, who of course was angsting over him in the background the whole time. I also like your Remus- he's nice and seems more confident than most people write him. ^__^

aa that was sort of sad, bittersweetish... dun't know why but still good... *two thumbs up with a toe throw in*