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Magician April Aries 2007-01-04 ch 2,	abusePlease update! I love this sort of story. Usually you get the formulaic S+S, T+Y, or E+T pairings. This one really thinks outside the box. I hope you add the next chapter soon. I keep kicking myself for not discovering stories like this sooner.
lilylisa31 2005-08-10 ch 2,	abuseI like this story. I wonder if you would continue.
Cal reflector 2005-08-03 ch 2,	abuseI can't see how what I wrote on livejournal would want to make you take down this wonderful piece of work...
Isis Temptation 2005-01-16 ch 1,	abuseGod, I loved it! It is so sad, you can even feel that pain growing inside of you! You're excellent, I just cannot describe your job in words (also, english is not my natural language,hehe). Ah, one more thing. Does the title (of the fanfic and of each chapter) is based on a song called Blackbird (the Beatles)? Because I love them... and I love that song. I just thought about it (sorry if I'm wrong). Could you please let me know what was the song Touya was listening to? Thank you. UPDATE SOON... PLEASE! please forgive me. I have a lot of mistakes, but as I say, I don't speak English that well.
ally-wolf-goddess 2004-11-18 ch 2,	abuseGreat Great Great is all i can say! i love it so far but its so sad tear Anywayz plz update soon
Belldandy's-Lover 2004-11-04 ch 1,	abuseWow I really love this story and if you saw the reviews on the other stories about Tomoyo and Touya you would know that I think they are the greatest couple in CCS. As in I would die to see them together and see them stay together. So anyway this story is very cool and dramatic. But I do have one critisism to it. You stopped at chapter two which got me hanging. And cursing in front of the computer screen. So please upload it OK. It's not like I'm commanding you too but I'm begging you to. Cause you see I got so hooked at you're story that I would like to know everything right away. So anyway keep up the good work OK Really Love you're work So if you have a new chapter already please tell me at armand_gwapo@ OK Thanks and good luck to you're other stories...
ghostwritergw 2004-08-01 ch 2, anon.	abusehi, I am a big T+T fan...This story of urs has been written really well. But the reasons for T+Y's saperation has not been clearly written... Hope the next chapter contains something about this... Bye.
Kerichi 2004-07-14 ch 2,	abuseThank you Silent Seraphim is right!! This story is so beautiful and sad! I can't wait for more -but I will. I hope you don't give this one up. It's worth te wait!
ForgottenBard 2004-03-25 ch 2, anon.	abuseHey- Love the story so far! Please update soon? Do I need to nag and stalk you? threatening glare Anyways, thanks for sharing your wonderful writing. I'll add this to my fav/updates!
"lina 2004-02-21 ch 2, anon.	abuseSorry, This is the first review I have ever done. And I dont' have a screen name. I just wanted to say that I really like this story/ I am looking forward to the next chapter!
Rinoa Kitty 2004-02-19 ch 2, anon.	abuseI really like this, even though it does sort of go against some basic CLAMP stuff. Touya and Yukito both seem different, but I suppose thats age and change, mostly. I really like the storyline and I can't wait to see the T&T parts! Keep up the good work!
Lili M. 2004-02-09 ch 2, anon.	abuseHi! Long time no see! (or is it read?) It´s been a while since I read anything on the CCS section, and then I passed by and found your history. It has made me happy because: a)there aren´t a lot of fics with alternate couples on the net, b)I particularly love CCS odd couples and c) I had always liked the fics I had read from you. Yes, the first chapter was very depressing (but you already know that), but I think it was OK, the story needs some conflict, right? The second chapter was very interesting, because we know how they react to the pain; it was very real. Would you get upset at me if I tell you that this fic is somewhat similar to another I read sometime ago? Of course it´s not identical, but they share the same ideas (loss, heal, etc.)I loved that fic too, and maybe you would find it interesting. The link is http://w.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=290591 Who knows, maybe that could give you some inspiration for this story ;P. Anyway, thank you for this fic, and don´t keep us waiting for too long. Ja ne!
butterflies4ever 2004-02-08 ch 2,	abuseAw! So good! Poor Sakura-chan and Touya-kun! I hope you update soon! This is a great story!
brokenAngelYue 2004-02-07 ch 2,	abuseOh! YAY!! Y&S...m yummies. Poor Touya. He and Tomoyo are in the same boat now. Granted it's got a hole in the bottom but hey, they all do. ^_~
butterflydreaming 2004-02-06 ch 2, anon.	abuseIt's always a pleasure to read something that takes its time. With a romance, particularly, since its the journey that's important, more so than the destination. Since these are parings that I am somewhat resistant to (really, even, maybe especially, Y/S), I am going to be reading this for everything but the destination. And going to be really, really hard to convince. I didn't review the first chapter when I read it (which was the time of my lurking), and I'd actually sort of forgotten about it. The opening fight is stabbingly on. This is kind of an uncomfortable story to read! Good thing I'm kind of a masochist! I can't tell pain and pleasure apart.

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