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| Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-06-07 ch 1,  | abuseA great story. I liked the part where Catherine and Warrick came to see Greg. |
| Aries Zodiac 2006-02-23 ch 1, | abuseGood story, great dialogue and good characterisation but please, were you writing in past tense or present tense? It is pretty confusing when it keeps switching randomly like that! Anyway, liked it otherwise! AZ |
| QueenOfTheUniverse 2005-11-11 ch 1, | abuseHey! Gosh, where've I been? This is a great story! And that was one of my fav episodes! I know you haven't been on the site in a while, I haven't either, but I'll see about reading your other pieces and perhaps you'll get this comment. And perhaps, someday, I'll get around to finishing some of the net fics I left undone. I know a lot of people really like them. So, if you get this and feel the need, keep bugging me, and after November, maybe I can get some of them done! -QOTU |
| leather leasure 2004-10-01 ch 1, | abusejust a heads up the line He heard someone saying, “Vitals are stable. We’ve got full thickness burns on the beck and back. |
| Morgaine 2004-03-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked your story, it was kinda sweet and PwF is my favorite episode. Only one thing annoyed me a bit while reading it: You're constantly switching between past and present tense. Careful proofreading of your text or getting a beta reader could fix that for you easily! |
| Henrika 2004-01-25 ch 1, | abuseGood story. Some spelling errors here and there. We need more Greg stories like this. Keep writing! |
| Animefangirl2 2004-01-10 ch 1, | abusePoor Greg U_U When I saw that episode and the lab exploded, I was all, "GREG! NO! ANYONE BUT HIM!" But he survived! YAY! Ok, getting off topic, LOVED THIS ONE-SHOT! Very well-written. I'm gonna add it to my favs. Sayonara! |
| 1fan-manyshows 2003-10-31 ch 1, | abusei love your writing style. pleae write a new story and i'll review it for you. you are really good. |
| Padfoot4ever 2003-10-21 ch 1, | abuseIts great u should have another chapter on Greg struggling with dealing with the explosion incident anyway great job!! |
| szhismine 2003-10-10 ch 1, | abusegreat fic! i loved Greg's reaction. ;) |
| Robin5502 2003-08-24 ch 1, | abuseI like it. It was a happy ending, that is until the last 6 lines... but it was still good. |
| Butterflied 2003-07-26 ch 1, | abuseI like this - it's depressing but true and portrays the characters well. |
| SaxiActingChick05 2003-07-25 ch 1, | abuseI like it |
| Vanima Nwalmaer 2003-07-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is good! I sadly haven't seen playing with fire, I've seen the ending but thats it, i really want to see it thought, but great fic!! |
| asUwsh 2003-07-25 ch 1, | abuseWow. Very good. And I thought I was the only one wondering that! lol. You did a great job- KEEP WRITING! *does the happy dance* |