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Birdie num num
2009-06-20 . chapter 26
This was good, thought it was very sad. I'd like to read a sequel. :)
Birdie num num
2009-06-20 . chapter 9
Oh, I like this fanfiction! I don't know why I didn't start reading it before...It's got Allora in it and my newest favorite character Jennor in it :)

yay! Andalites <3
CharlieTheUnicorn13
2008-06-18 . chapter 26
Oh... My... God... That was the BEST fanfiction for any book, TV show, or movie, that I have ever read or watched. And I mean that. Seriously. Have you ever considered doing some orginial work and getting published? Anyway, you have an amazing gift for writing. Thank you so much for this wonderful read.
DragonMystic
2007-11-14 . chapter 26
Awesome Fic! I loved it XD
Rovinierre
2007-10-13 . chapter 26
That was beautiful! Wonderful and compelling. I will be sure to read the sequel. =]
I noticed a few grammatical/spelling errors throughout the story but all in all, well written and well formatted. I've been reading it all night!

The only other thing that bothered me was using War-Princess. I don't know, to me it doesn't sound right. Even if said rank is for a female...it just seems weird. I don't know. That's only one thing, though, the rest I had no problem with.

I will read the sequel most likely tomorrow. =]
M&M
2007-08-08 . chapter 26
This was so good that I just had to come review it again! (And yeah, read it again, too!) I read some of the other reviews first, though, and someone mentioned that the end made Terenia the One (like from book 54?) It looks that way, but I don't know...anyway, I'd pay you to do a sequel. Honest...if you like pennies...
(it's okay, I got lots. I've been collecting for four years and you can have them all if you'll do a sequel!) :)
Zedd
2007-06-23 . chapter 26
Sorry, dont hsve time for proper review, so SEQUEL!!
Amethyst Asheryn
2007-06-03 . chapter 25
That makes me feel bad for the Yeerks. That...is kind of scary. LOL. But that's okay. I liked this chapter. :)
Lon
voodooqueen126
2007-05-29 . chapter 26
Well you admit to it, this is not a clean ending. i look forward to finding out what happens next.
Great chapter though.
Pharrells Girl
2007-05-28 . chapter 1
Wow. Terenia. Just wow. Your writing is so vivid and filled with emotion. You go into a great deal of visual depth into your story as will. I feel that I'm being sucked in, watching the events unfold in front of my eyes. (Then again you do teach English :) ) Great job, and I'll be commenting on the next chapters!
Mrowrkat98
2007-05-28 . chapter 26
This was an amazing story! Wow. The end was perfect, and I think it ties up some loose ends left by the Animorphs series, because that would make Terenia The One, wouldn't it? Anyway,the story was great, and I really enjoyed it. I can't wait to read more of your stories.

KIWI
Mel
2007-05-27 . chapter 26
Wow. I sure didn't expect an epilogue...however, that was one of the best written things ever! (In the last two chapters you made several mistakes, such as writing, 'Andalite's' instead of 'Andalites' as a simple plural. Anyway, YES! DO A SEQUEL! The story between Terenia, Geroth, Rekora is far from over...as well as between the Yeerks, Humans and Andalites, if the epilogue you wrote meant anything!
Great job! Loved it!
voodooqueen126
2007-05-27 . chapter 25
too bad for her poor host!
PowerPen
2007-05-26 . chapter 25
A very fitting end for Book-Terenia, and a very fitting end for the story (besides the epilogue). Good job!
Mel
2007-05-05 . chapter 24
That was unexpected. Another great chapter, though. Nice English, too. (You'd laugh if you saw me write that. I accidentally wrote 'Englush.') Anyway, cool to see the update! Glad to see that you update frequently...and that each update is well worth the short wait!
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