WOW. I've read all od Neko-chan's YnM ficcies, and this fits in almost perfectly. I's a little askance in tone, so it's a perfect little Malik story. _ Even an Ignoranium Dubster like me can really like it!

Ja ne,

Alana

"Oui caa?

Adrienne: 0.0 HOLY CRAP THIS WAS COOL!

Krystal: In answer to your question, yes I've heard of Mystic Dragon's story and I read it, BUT I can't remember any of it. I mean, I can't even remember which part Yugi played in. I have a bad memory.

Adrienne: GOOD! AUTHOR NEEDS PLUSHIE!

Krystal: Adrienne, calm down! And trust me, my plot line isn't like hers. -_-;; Hers is probably better... However, I'm starting to think I should fix teh beginning. People are starting to say that.

Adrienne: THEN FIX THE DAMN BEGINNING! HERE'S A PLUSHIE! *hands authoress a Yugi and Yami plushie... or a Ryou and Bakura plushie, whichever she thinks author likes better*

Krystal: And I can't even remember if Anzu was used in the Past, Present, and Future... was Jounouchi in there, too?

Adrienne: Are you trying to act stupid?

Krystal: Adrienne, for real, I can't remember. I think I'm starting to develope a disease.

Adrienne: You can't remember it, can you?

Krystal: Oh for God's sake! I SAID NO! But, I will change the beginning. I'll be taking it down. Thank you for pointing that out.

Adrienne: WHAT? TAKE IT DOWN!

Krystal: I'll put it back up, just changing it. From what everyone says, it does sound like her story... BTW, I really like this piece. _

Adrienne: GOOD! YOU SHOULD LIKE IT!

Y'know, I noticed something in both this fic and in Supernova, it almost seems like Yami Malik LIKED Ryou. 0_o

Ignore my silly little mind.

Anyway, lovely ficu!

O_o These Yami no Malik fics of yours are really... really... Okay, my English isn't good enough for me to say what they are. I somewhat doubt if I could say it in _any_ language...

One thing's clear, that was _good_. I don't understand why I haven't read it earlier...

And then... I read your Fangirl's Guide yesterday, and came now to take another look at it... and it's gone! Don't tell me it's been removed... *sigh* Anyway, it _was_ mostly harmless (which was proven: Finland still exists... I think.)

Well, love your writing, as usual.

...like! likelikelikelike!

Misto: She always babbles when happy...

...I like it lots! Though I think I confused myself, as I thought it was Ryou POV at first, then realised it was Malik, then got confused again...

Though, Malik could see Yami & Yugi, but Ryou wasn't there...

..He died in 'Supernova', so I guess he was dead too.. *whiper*

Gaaaah wargle. ::falls over::

Hehehe. I liked it, though Yami Malik's insanity here is a bit unlike his insanity in the comic. Heh. But I like it anyway.

The one thing that bothers me - Ore-sama means "I" so shouldn't its verbs be conjugated like "I"? Ore-sama am, Ore-sama love, etc. Just at thought. .

Lovely sadism fic. Must archive. _

Sam

That was a very talented piece of work. I really enjoyed reading it, and it's going straight to the favourites list.

Thanks for the great read.

Trinity.

Er...Malik has Issues, yepyep. *Major* Issues...but then, don't we all? ; Me likes it very much.

I think that this is fantastically fantastic (which is probably a bad reflection on me). Your stories are alway so original and well written. keep up the good work!

::gapes in awe:: Wow. I love it. I've been inspired! ::rushes off to start writing a newly inspired story that will hopefully be up on FF.net soon::

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*babbles happily and clings to 'Zoo-san and the Ficu-sama* Ne! Automatically going on my faves-yes, yes. *nods sagely*

This was... This was... 'wow.' A crude word, yes; but so utterly true. Sadistic and cruel-and yet hope-filled and gorgeous nonetheless. Doesn't hikari-pretty know that his Yami-Darkness cannot protect him always? Sometimes anger and loathing and hatred and revenge get the better part of _anyone_... and beautiful things die.

But hikari-pretty is still beautiful.

Daamn, 'Zoo-san. The irony was so twisted and cruel. I LUFF J00! *tackle glomps*

This ficu was excellent and I am _amazed_ that you would want to do Malik's antithesis-and I officially claim this to be a companion Malik POV ficu... if you want it to be.

Your writing just gets better and better-every single time I reread any of your stuff, I'm just flat-out amazed at what you're able to accomplish through the written word.

_EXCELLENT JOB._

Neko-chan

Nicely done. Imagery was decidedly creepy, but then again I expected noting less. *grins*

Artemis

I'd like to say you write well. But that was just mean. I think. Bakura was getting kicked by Yami Malik, right?