I fear you've stopped writing on this story, but I can't express how much I truly want to see it finished. I adore all of your Suikoden yaoi fics, but your Viktor/Flik ones are especially great.

Your Viktor/Flik fics are really fun and interesting!
Hope you'll write more and update soon. ^^

Not a long one tonight, Nash. ^^
Great, as always! I feel kind of bad for Flik, but I seriously love Viktor's attitude too much to not be cheering him on! :P
I'm really curious about how this brawl will turn out...though I could guess. I just think of Flik as a pansy...probably no reason for that, just do...
I never liked the hero OR Gremio, but once again, you give your characters so much life, it's hard not to at least get to know them and understand them a little more.
Great work! :D
...Now what's up with "Emerald..." ?

A fight! Who's gonna win? oh oh i can't wait to see! This chap is great keep up the good work! Well enjoy ^_-
anyways keep on smiling

I´ve loved it! ^.^ I was dying to see the next chapter, and now, I´m waiting to see the fight... It´s getting more and more exciting, at each chapter... ^.~

I like the fact that your milking this pairing for all its worth. Its nice to see such a unique take on shonen-ai.

Hi! Wow i love this fic!! Are you going to continue? I hope so it's so good! yeah...well i hope you are enjoying it too ^_^!
Anyways keep on smiling
Jade McDohl AKA Sweet Madison ^_^

I want to comment on the sheer beauty of your STORY, but get so easily distracted by the sheer elegance of your WRITING. That's what I've finally realized--it's not just that your stories are so perfect I'm left speechless, but the way you write them leaves the reader absolutely spellbound. Wow...incredible! I don't know how you do it...mixing just EXACTLY the right blend of humor and romantic fluff, and then your angst...!

Ack! You gave McDohl personality! It can be done! I thought he was a zombie or something. ^^ Not a voice, but a personality, and that's talent! Everything about this just radiates "Suikoden." You keep it all in the lines, but spice it up!

Oh, again, you put the reader right into the Suiko world as if it were perfectly real. I don't know how you do this! Really amazing--but just by saying "two hours by boat to Kaku," it makes everything so much more realistic... I'm really lacking in that department, I'm realizing. :/ Wow...you're good. And not just the time it takes to get to Kaku, but the sea sickness...yeah, I feel like I'm on that boat (although I don't really get seasick, I'm actually feeling it!).

It's so great the way you make thost cheesy 2-D towns come to life like real cities! Woh, here I go with the line-by-liners...lol I can’t help it.

I was ready to slap Flik for a minute (he's so damn stubborn!) but Viktor really put him in his place! Kudos!

Ah..."a mundane thing like shaving" adds such detail to your characters! Even your NPCs had personality! Brilliance shining through, yet again!

My favorite line: "his hands curled into fists again. He wished they were curled around Flik’s finely arched, pale column of a beautiful neck instead." AH! *dies swooning*

That's IT?!?!? EK! MUST--WRITE--MORE--! (*dancing in circles, chanting UST! UST! UST! tra-la-la!*)

AH! *in rapture* YAI! I love this! So... interesting! I´m dying to know how the relationship will develop... This tension between the two makes me want to read this again anda again anda again!

Dying to see what will happen... ^.^

BYE!

Yay, another great fic from you, this one I will deffinently continue to read. I read all of your fics anyway, heehee. Flik, that arrogant bastard!! But I love him so much for it ^^ Oh, I'm giving my shot at an adventure/romance FlikxViktor, if you're interested. Can't wait to see more!! *Dark Flower*

^.^ I loved it... You style of writing is VERY good... I love the way you describes them both and the way they act...

And I am always looking for more of yoyr fiction! ^.^

Another Viktor/Flik!! My all time favourite coupling by my favourite author!! I can't wait to read more, it has an interesting thought, I can always imagine Viktor falling first, and Flik being pissy and reluctant about it. Keep up the great work!! *Dark Flower*

Well! I certainly enjoyed part one, and I hope you post again soon! I do so love Flik and Viktor, but this is the first I've actually read of them being paired together. I've seen it written lots of times, but this is the first vik/flik I've been tempted to read. And I love it! I don't know how in the world Viktor's going to get that stoic Flik to fall in love with him; I'm on the edge of my seat so please write more soon!