that was a cute fic to boot!

AW!

1 WORD:CUTE!



LATER!

i luv this storyy! its so cute!


i was in ss class and i came up wit a story plot thingie.
its like when sesshoumaru is the lord of the west and kagome is a slave at his castle or someting like that. im not good at writing stories andi noticed that u luv sess/kag stories if u like da theme u can use it! cuase lord nows i wont! just given u a fresh idea! I LUV DA STORY=D

This was realy awesome cute to I always thought thats how they would be together. and Fuffy is ALOT nicer in this fic too, awesome work keep it up! :3 :D
( P.S. you'd be a great play writer! )

a little oc but it was cool anyway.

what a bout the second chap?

if you want to make it more interesting you should have some one in the background plotting to break apart sesshoumaru and kagome. that way your rteaders will feel more deepth of the characters feelings for each other. Or you can create another story where they're in 1485 and kagome has tons of suitors competing for ger hand in marriage and inuyasha and sess are trying to commpett for her hand just some suggestions. SEE IF THIS WOULD WORK OUT if not then my idea really sucks. Have fun with your next story. Ok.

i like the beginning

This is a really good one-shot (Can you feel the 'but?') but, (HA! said so...-.-;) it's a bit rushed. If you make a full story of this it would be easier to read! This is not a flame! It's just to help. Ya know, if you make a full story of this, you would get more reviews... even though... You got a lot of reviews for a one-shot! GO YOU!

OMG THANK YOU i NEVER EVER like one-shots but thanks to u I LOVE THEN YEA this is the only one0shot i really love it it's so sweet YEA

Aw, sweet AND fluffy. Little too OOC-ness on Sesshi's account I felt...other than that simply adorable! ^_^

aw!That was so romantic!^_^

i loved it.you should write another chapter.i was really cute=^^=

It's so sweet...^_^