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amberangel999
2009-09-28 . chapter 6
I CANNOT HELP BUT REVIEW THIS WONDERFUL CHAPTER! Finally someone and Ajewell at that got rid of shampoo! I thank you a million times for eliminating her from the list of annoying fiances! u should know by the screen name who I am :) Wonderful story!
Rishtalak
2009-06-06 . chapter 6
Ah, this is shaping up to be a great story. I'm half dreading, half wishing for the revelation of Ranma's curse to Akane...that should be an interesting chapter!
Ningen Demonai
2009-04-26 . chapter 6
Oh, I really DO hope that you update this someday! Things were getting really exciting and now you have us waiting. I like this fic a lot, so thank you for writing it!
pOCHI
2009-04-08 . chapter 6
A stroke of BRILLIANCE the Kuno/Shampoo pairing! She always annoyed me, the way she hung all over Ranma. I do feel sorry for Nerima though, imagine their creepy offspring!
I know its been a few years since you last updated this but PLEASE DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THIS! I WANT-NO I NEED MORE! {pls don't torture this pure junkie you've created n give her her drugs!}
pOCHI
2009-04-08 . chapter 4
"The Middle Tendo girl looked at her as if she had gone mad. “Akane,” she answered incredulously. “Do you have any idea how much that information cost them? Forcing me to shatter their delusions would only make them angry and broke.” Pausing for a brief, dramatic moment Nabiki set her piercing eyes on her younger sister. “Did you ever stop to think about them?” she demanded.

Akane’s mouth fell open in surprise: she didn’t know what to make of such twisted logic."

I ALMOST DIED WHEN I READ THAT! ROFLMFAO!
My-name-is-foxglove
2008-07-06 . chapter 6
Please, for the love of GOD, update this story soon! I really like it and I've just been finding brilliant and unfinished stories all day long and I'd REALLY like to see one updated soon!
Lunar Kitty Kat
2008-06-27 . chapter 6
I can see Kuno/Shampoo working!
jdcocoagirl
2008-06-17 . chapter 6
wow this is a very nice story line, i love the idea that ranma has feelings for akane and how akane seem to trust both of his side... hope you keep going the story... and akane figuring that ranko and ranma is just one...
Akane-Chan
2008-04-29 . chapter 6
Oh my! Shampoo... Kuno? Now THAT'S SOME FLIP! At least you got rid of her... muahaha lol i dont like Shampoo much... nice story btw, and I'm waitin patiently for the next upadte! (yeah right :P, im actually breaking bricks right know) Hey btw, Ryoga is supposed to turn into P-chan right? and what's up with Ranma's dad? and how long are u gonna make this u think cuz I really think this is a nice alternate for ranma 1/2, sorry for so many questions and great story again!
deepali
2007-11-12 . chapter 6
wow, what a twist! i can't wait to see how kuno reacts with shampoo's attempting to kill akane.
erzamarie
2007-08-05 . chapter 1
Hello! I really love your story. Hope you can update soon. I'm kinda guessing how your gonna introduce the rest of the gang and how will the story progress. Please do post the next chapters... I'm begging you... (just kidding)
shanfov
2007-07-02 . chapter 6
wow! such an interesting story, i cant wait for the next chapter. i hope it would be soon too though ^.~
SkippyPanda
2007-06-12 . chapter 6
Absolutely perfect! This is just the way I would have envisioned it! except. better. somehow.

I first of all would like to compliment you on sticking true to the characters (plus or minus the liberties you have as an author). It's hard to do sometimes when AU circumstances are present, but you seem to be doing quite well!

The mixture of action and romance as well as bits of humor and even more serious moments is exactly what all good writing should have. It's a delicate balance, but once again, I'm very impressed with how well you've kept it :]

I really have no complaints except... I wish I knew more of what Akane was thinking. There seems to be much heavier insight from Ranma's thoughts, but that quality also allows for some interesting surprises and developments :] I can't wait for another chapter!
M-chan
2007-06-11 . chapter 6
great story! love where this is going! UPDATE, UPDATE AND UPDATE MORE,plz! Love ur sotry of the forgotten game, too. ur an awesome writer! plz keep writing and updating!
Streaming Radiant Fire
2007-06-03 . chapter 6
THAT WAS SO AWESOME! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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