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| Suzy87 2006-07-05 ch 1,  | abuseGood one-shot fic! Great job! |
| Professional scatterbrain 2004-05-18 ch 1, | abusegreat fic |
| equisetum 2004-02-05 ch 1, | abuseI love both of the stories you have posted here. You should write more! You manage to do Sarkney without making it sappy. He walks away from her car. I can't say how happy I am you ended it with that, rather than having them drive off into the sunset together. |
| Chic 2003-07-29 ch 1, | abuseVery well writtern! Loved every minute of it. |
| M.Tenenbaum 2003-07-26 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! I liked how you fleshed out both Syd and Sark. Nice story structure. I hope inspiration comes back soon so you can add more to this story. :) InDiEpUnK |
| Tasherie 2003-07-26 ch 1, | abuseThis was a really amazing story. I loved it even more on my second read through. I liked both Syd and Sark in this. It was very believable, both Syd's quest for revenge and Sark's weariness. I am hoping for a sequel! |
| screen names are tacky 2003-07-26 ch 1, | abuseamazing story! i mean, there was so much emotion, and life, and; jesus, how does anybody write that well? that was beyond brilliant, and i'm just still so awe-stricken at how wonderful that was. i think you wrote the two charcters really well, and just..this is so gross. i can't even praise you properly. you are such a talented write, and i can't wait for your next piece. now for the scene that you saw. i would say, sark leaning into syd, or irina reaching out to syd, or (yes, there's a third!) sark shooting sloane. |
| Valoriahn 2003-07-26 ch 1, | abuseExcelent Story! very good, I really enjoyed it. Another instalment would be great! though it doesn't nead it! you tied everything up perfectly! |
| Jade2099 2003-07-26 ch 1, | abuseWow! So much imagery! I would love to see what happens next, but this is a great stand alone fic too. I'm really beginning to be a Sarkney fan. hehehe |
| tini243 2003-07-25 ch 1, | abuseThat was really beautiful. I hope your inspiration does me a favour and brings you to write a sequel to this. I love the way you described the similaritys between Sark and Sydney, the way they both were fed up with their lives under the influence of Irina and Sloane. The silent understanding between the two of them, his leaning against her and her stroking his hair were just .. great. |