Oh god.

Oh god no.

With this one chapter alone, I could not sleep, I was that disturbed. I have skipped through this fic, having first thought 'YAY, ANOTHER HILTZ FIC!' Only to watch it descend into something that not even I could write my way out of - and trust me, I've written some scary stuff. I mean seriously...what? WHAT?

I THINK PERHAPS YOU SAW A DIFFERENT VERSION OF ZOIDS *nods* YES.

Tell me, no matter how much character development goes into a fic, why in hell would Fiona and Moonbay ever actually trust Hiltz, considering all the damage he did? Even with his LOLTRAGICK backstory? Why, if he was formly Fiona's fiance...no, scratch that, she was fourteen when she was broken out of her pod, HE WOULD REMEMBER AND PERHAPS NOT TRY TO KILL HER. ENTICE HER TO HIS SIDE MAYBE.

Hiltz is a very unfortunate character. He wanted to restore his people, and his land, and get rid of the usurpers who did not deserve it (i.e the humans) and I'm pretty sure dying and ending up in a world of magical unicorns and elves from a compltely different story was not on his list of Things To Do When I Am Dead. Oh yeah, and sleep with demonic princesses.

Next thing you know the princess is going to be pregnant, right? DON'T YOU SMIRK AT ME. I SEE YOU THERE.

Your name's not Kim too, is it by any chance?

Keep writing by all means, no way am I telling you to stop. It's just, this isn't Hiltz anymore, and it probably never was, and for that I am sad. When has he ever given the impression of saying...*cringes as she speaks* horizontal monster mash? Seriously?

Man, that needs to be captioned. *pulls out sketchbook* dA HERE I COME.

Magical unicorns! Next thing you know it'll be a trip to candy mountain and Hiltz will meet a magical Durapluradon or whatever the hell it is.

AH! AH! *flees, giving Dragoon Paladin a sly kick on the way out*

Lol, that was soo soo soo roomanteek! XD Lol, romances are fun! In a mushy way, of course. XD Kim and Hiltz really, er, like each other, eh? *chuckles* Update soon!

Kim's in trouble now, I guess...Poor kid.
That was a rather dramatic ending. ^_^ Lol, Hiltz' revelation is a pretty explosive one, given Kim's circumstances.

LMAO, Anubis eating pie...And that smart remark! ROTFLMAO!! XD *imitates Anubis* 'IT'S NOT MY FAULT YOUR SON FINALLY CAME OUT OF THE...' *trails off and bursts out laughing* Awesome work! XD XD XD

Whoa...If Shade's been pushed too far, one life will still be lost...That's kinda ironic... O_O;; Nice song: goes well with the chappie. ^_^ Oh, man, I sure hope no one dies...

YES!! A dragon tear! Kim rulez!! XD XD ^o^() *starts jumping up and down* Go, Hiltz! GO!! Run like the wind! Save Xavier!! >O< *starts biting nails*

Well...I guess all the dragon tears are down for the count...For an Underworld, the place sure is full of un-Underworldly beings like fairies and unicorns...

Zapper: Lol, I'm glad atleast Hiltz pointed that out, switching from land to land eh? Geez, next thing you know, he'll be in the Mushroom Kingdom!
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Grappler: But anyway, good job on all 19 chapters so far, I hope we managed to read them all correctly, anuway...
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Dom: *drools*
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Zako1-2-3: "for the Future of the Dark Axis?"
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Audiance: "ZAKO SOLDIERS FIGHT, YEAH!"

Saphira, eh? She is the dragon from the novel Eragon, if I'm not mistaken... ;) Man, the aqua unicorn... *wants to draw the unicorn or take a pic of it* It musta been awesome...! ^o^

Two chappies in a single go, eh? Not bad, not bad at all! ^-^() especially the dragons...Dragons rule! XD Lol, off-topic...Nice work here! Keep it up, QB! ^_^

Moonbay's next...Never expected that! XD Startling revelation there; Hiltz was Fiona's fiance before the Big Blast that wiped Zoidia out...

Aw, so it's a Hiltz/Fiona pairing, right? ^^ There's something new! Aw, it's so sweet... XD
Nice battle scene! You described Fiona's clothes and sword very well...Awesome. ^_^ Update soon!

Fiona's got kids...I feel sorry for her and all the people she left behind... u_u
Hiltz' father sounds nasty...Dude, no wonder Hiltz grew up that way...

Strange offer...Poor Dogma is in a fix... XD Hiltz'll come to the rescue, I suppose...Go, Hiltz! If it is him who shall indeed save 'em, then I'm behind him all the way! ^o^()

Lucky you, you have time for updates! XD I don't have enought time to write and plan...*sighs*
Fiona's dead?! O_O Whoa...How'd she die, dude? And what happened to her...?