LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!

nice story i like it

Must I poke you with a stick or let my puppy bite your ankles for you to write the next one? But for real I will do it it's been like two years since you last updated and it's ** like EVIL to do that...

i love ur story! but when is jack&co goin 2 find out about er womaness?isn't she abit 2 young 4 jack?i mean 13...r u gonna make er older (plz do)??is jack gon fall in luv wt er? plz continue !

hey this story is getting very interesting. keep it up. update next chapter soon.

Well, hurry up with the next one!

*stares blankly*
You didn't just...abandon this...did you?
I mean...it's an awesome idea. Great characters. You've got a story ahead of you.
You're just...napping...right?

Please?

please write more please please please

AHH! Did you get that from the Rescuers Downunder! like the little diamond thing and the light! 0_0

Please update soon, either here or at Adfanfic. I've really enjoyed your story so far, and cant wait til you post again.

haha - YES! finally! a bit of explanation for the "slappage" ... that was one thing the movie was missing - the explanation for Scarlet's slap - so it was nice that you threw that in there - it was very funny to read too! haah - loads of laughs at 4 in the morning! :)
*~Arisia~*

Excellente! That sounds like a really pretty necklace ... I want it! lol ... ok - so I don't - but it sounded like a funny thing to say! Anyways - very good chapter - tres enjoyable and I look forward to reading the next one ... which will be right now
hehe
*~Arisia~*

Quarter after seven and here's another one! lol - I've also recruited another individual to read and review your story - because I'm SUCH a good roomate! lol . .I really have to stop it with that dont I?
Anyways, once again - very well written and descriptive, its interesting to see you throw in sentences that pop up in the movie... just be careful not to over use them (i'm not saying you are - just saying to watch out for that trap).
My next review should be within the hour! haha
*~Arisia~*

Very good writing, now you have me wondering what is going to happen, so I am going to have to keep writing...keep up the good work:D

Here's another review - fresh off the press - haha - I'm so not funny - but I really dont' care either! Cuz its 6:30 (you guys left like 5 minutes ago) and I'm already bored! So expect a few reviews later on tonight!
Anyways, excellent chapter ... in the words of a certain other roomate ... ahem >YOU ROCK