I'm bored. The opening (chpt. 1) turned me off because it was only used to introduce new characters which I typically do not enjoy in fanfiction because they are not developped enough. Now, all I feel is like: this happend, then this happened, then this happened. It's not a story, and it's not going anywhere (at least not anywhere fast, or anywhere I am truely interested in.) Your ideas are okay, and I don't mind first person-but entirely first person is getting annoying. (And you've turned Connie into a floozy. Though I applaud you for not calling her 'Cons' at all.) It's too much usless content and not enough development. You're introducing all sorts of ideas quickly and then dismissing them for chapter after chapter and maybe, touching on them again briefly, maybe. It's just not Kosher (possible bad spelling there-sorry.) Anyhow, it's way cool, the ideas and all, but far too un-believable at most times. Thanks for 1/2 a ride-
Cheers Jen

Well, hey! I finally found it. That's good. :) I remember reading this fic like a year ago, except wasn't it on a different website? I remember colors...hmm...nevermind.

I tried looking for it again (another one too), who knew they were on fanfiction?
Great story! I loved it when I read it the first time, even better the second!

ttfn
ali

Tsk tsk Charlie, how could you lie to your dear old mother?? *shakes head*

I have to say that I'm impressed, even though it took a while, that you guys finished this, since it had been a year since you last updated I thought you forgot all about it.

Now, however, I must go back and re-read a certain 37 chapter story so I can enjoy it all over again... *wink*

I really hope you two write another story together, this one was fantastic.

-Em

WOW! just simply amazing! I loved this story so much its unbelieveable! I really hope u do a sequel! please! Its just so funny! I love all the sarky attictudes and Pstman and Charliea re jsut to hilerious.
Im actually quite sad its finished! Im gonna have to read it again to keep me happy untill u bring a sequel out (u are bringin one out arnt you? :) hehe ) U 2 write really well together and i think both of you could easly be pro writers! So pretty please with TWO cherrys on top . .write another one . . plz! ;)

oh no!...is it done!?

AMAZING STORY! wow this is one of the ebst storys i have ever read! I love all the sarcastic comments and Kennys sneaky moments cutting the queue. I just love it all! Are you gonna write more chaplters? and After this are you gonna do a sequal or something? Im a little confused coz im not sure if this is the end of the story or not lol. Connie and Guy havnt really have much of a relationship in the story so far. Adam and Charlie are hilerious. Antony is sweet! I really like Chris and Matt though and it would b cool if they hooked up with someone . .one of the girls maybe? Oh wait nah there all taken. It would b funny if u made them play truth or dare or something lol. Oh and loved Connies evilness in the last chapter.

hey im a new reader. I really like this story but am not very far in it at the moment but ill get there soon! lol. Guy and Connie havnt really got that close of a relationship have they? lol. I hope u write some more soon even though i havnt finished yet lol. Buh- Bye.

This is good...I just wish there was more bash slash. Please continue

i finally finished reading this after a week!! lol! but it was really good! i can't wait for you to update so i can find out what was in that letter! well good job to the both of you!

very good story. i liked the characters and enjoyed the plot...well, way things went really. a few missing words and spelling errors but overall a grand read.

Oh, how I love this story! I'm a little sad for 2 reasons though:
#1 - Fred and Cecilia left...they're two of my favorite OC's ever!
#2 - The story's almost over :( Any plans for a sequel??

I have been reading this fan fiction for days. And, when I finally get to the end of chapter Thirty-four, there is another chapter posted!AH! Well *shrugs* can't say I'm not happy!lol Please keep going, this is really good!:)

YAYY! I love updates! *cheers for updates* Ar ar aroo!! this was great, even though there weren't any fights or anything. HA! Cecila's a cool character, and I sometimes agree with her on some levels. some things she says are so true because i feel like that too, but i wouldn't say shes my doppleganger or something. pardon me, i'm not awake. its 9:30-ish and i just woke up. ha. i'm daft. i'm still sad about this story coming to a close. i'm so happy i read all those chapters before. it was quite amusing! whom! haha i think its kinda funny that barely anybody called cecila her actual name in this chapter. fred called her kid like three times in bed and i was all, 'yo pal, YOU'RE a kid too!' and I also realized that these kids are like, 14-15 and they have such angsty lives! I LOVE IT! can't live without that angst, tension, or love triangles. lovee it! there should be like, a sequel when your done! YAY!
-Chelsea COdename: StormShadow--

hi! this is the first storied i've reviewed since i'm back! actually i haven't even read this chapter, because i have to copy and paste everything long i read into word so i can read when i'm not on the internet 'cause i can on stay on for an hour at this point in time blah blah blah...anyways i'm sure it's great! i got caught up and i think you two are like perfect co-writers! i also love the journals, they're like the best things to read! i should go now though, i have some more things to take care of...ugh. but i love this story(i think you know that...)and i need to talk to both Kristine and Cecilia so I'll talk to you the next time you're online or i'll e-mail you! luv ya Samantha aKa iluvguygermaine00(...it feels so good to do that again...ha!i'm such a loser...)

You updated! Whoop WHOOP! I'm so excited! And this chapter was worth the wait, it was a good one. Poor Luis, all alone while everybody and their momma is with a girl/boy. I'm overjoyed that Averman found himself some love! I liked when Luis was talking about the bash brothers being together, and how it can't be wrong. Luis is a good guy! I was watching the Sandlot with my cousins yesterday and I noticed just how cute Mike Vitar really is. Anyway, back on topic. Loved this chapter, hope to read more soon!