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| MeshiGohiku 2008-06-04 ch 3, | abusei wonder what would happen if David woke up and found the 'aliens' in the room talking to him and saying that she was 'dead' and then she woke up how would that turn out? something futureific. or something like that. even though the movie ended saddly, there has to be a happy ending somewhere in it...maybe? |
| V.M. Bell 2003-08-14 ch 3, | abuseWow, so moving! Ahh! I'm crying! Geez, I'm such a sap for these kind of stories and I love A.I. Great fic! I like the incorporation of dialogue from the film. Signing off, V.M. Bell |
| Rainbowscape 2003-08-10 ch 3, | abuseAn excellent piece of writing. I enjoyed how you captured Monica's thoughts about David. I liked how you brought up the question about why Henry did not take part in the imprinting and how Monica's feelings about David changed over time. |