 Deana 2003-08-22 . chapter 12YAY! *sniff sniff* I'm so happy! WOO HOO! That's cool too, another baby! I love reading about Frank & Loralei, and Farron & Kara! I can't wait for the next one! ;) |
 Cindy 2003-08-22 . chapter 12 I loved this story and all the characters you had alot of suspense and action and some beautiful scenes and a lot of tears at first now they are happy tears. Loralei and Frank having another baby can't wait for more. |
 Serena1221 2003-08-21 . chapter 12 Very beautiful ending ladies!
And another baby to boot!
Bravo |
 Dawn369 2003-08-21 . chapter 12Oh, that was simply beautiful. An ending to end all endings. I loved the last chapter. So happy to see Kara and Farron together and so loving. Lorelei and Frank were priceless. I loved her ribbing him to death over the pregnancy until she finally told him. Marie and Shel, you weaved one hell of tale here. Very nicely written. |
 Nicky 2003-08-21 . chapter 12 I loved the ending to this story. Not only do Farron and Kara finally make up, but Loralei and Frank are going to have another baby. Aw, that's so sweet. And I loved how she teased the poor man about it. That was too funny. I hope there is another story in the works because I want to hear more about this family and all of the drama that surrounds them. :) |
 Khalessa 2003-08-21 . chapter 12WTG Shel, another major score. I enjoyed this almost as much as I eenjoyed SHot In The Dark, which is still way up there in UC fanfic realms! |
 Nicky 2003-08-20 . chapter 11 I'm so glad they got the babies back and Farron didn't have to lose his life in the process. Ortiz had it coming to him. I think it was a fitting end to his life.
I wonder what Loralei, Kara, and Alex were laughing about? I can't wait to find out. It's time for fun to return to their lives. |
 Cindy 2003-08-19 . chapter 11 That is such a great story and that chapter so much suspense. I am glad that the babies are alright and everyone is alright. Can't wait for more. |
 Deana 2003-08-19 . chapter 11YAY! YAY! YAY! Everyone's alive! They got the babies back and killed the badguys! WOO HOO! ;) |
 Dawn369 2003-08-19 . chapter 11Oh thank goodness for this chapter. I was dying when Kara fell over with Ortiz, I somehow thought she had been injured as well. Damn good chapter. I felt so bad for Farron, but everything turned out well. Thanks girls. Terrific. |
 Nicky 2003-08-17 . chapter 10 At least Loralie's crazy plan led them to Farron and the kidnappers. I just hope everyone can make it out alive. There's even more to lose than last time. I can't wait to read more!! |
 Cindy 2003-08-17 . chapter 10 Oh Frank is going to kill Loralei when he gets her if they all get out. I hope they can get to them before something happens to any of them. Great story and such suspense. |
 Deana 2003-08-17 . chapter 10*sniff sniff* You were right, that ending brought tears to my eyes! *sniff sniff* To be in the same building and HEAR her kidnapped babies crying, but unable to hold them...gosh... |
 Dawn369 2003-08-17 . chapter 10Okay crying time again. Oh my gosh, I thought that Lorelei would have made it to Frank before she was caught, but I am glad that he found her. Now, where the hell did they put Kara that she can't see anything except here her babies and where is Farron?
I need another chapter or I am going to go insane. Another great chapter girls. |
 Cindy 2003-08-16 . chapter 9 Oh the suspense this is a great story. That Loralei is a tricky one even tricking her husband which Frank is going to kill her what a great story. I hope the team can get there in time and the babies are alright along with Farron. |