D: you don't suck, Ana. I ain't no poetry-major or anything, so I can't really offer critisism. **, I dunno if I even spelled critisizm right. DAMNIT.

My only suggestion is go over your spelling and grammar. Seriously. BUT OTHER THAN THAT, GG.

*chucklez* Your poems are just like mine. Now that I’ve seen them from an outsider’s POV – well sort of, anyway – I can realize how awkward such a load of rhyming is. I think it’s best to alternate freestyle and the occasional rhyme rather than have a whole lump of rhyming like that. And... it's kinda cliche. No offense or anything.

~Fyredra~

That was awesome!Yet so sad too!*starts crying*

artamis: O_o; ok thaT SORTS made sense... but it was great!! ^-^

moon: * glomps jiro * i like you ^-^

jiro: Hey? what the..? can you get off?

moon: sure * gets off jiro * great poem!! i liked it!! ^-^

artamis: R&R our work to!! ^-^