its a little meaningless...and feels unfinished. it is a cute idea though

Nice little story. It's nice to read stories like these once and a while. Anyway, nice job.

Bye :)

it all kinda happened too fast, that it did. (mua ha ha ha, kenshin-licous) it was kawaii though..

Please continue your story.

Surprise me. I'm expecting something more from this so surprise me.

That is cute, but the story needs to be longer. You can do so much more with it to not just leave it like it is.