Neither the doctor nor lucius seem to be conscious of the fact that one can die from blood loss within a minute. "Lucius leisurely made his way downstairs" and the doctor stopped to trace his finger over the scar
I like the doctor, but he seems a bit too Griffindorish, being okay with sacrificing himself but not his family. I also wonder how he knows Dumbledore well enough to think of informing him, but not well enough to follow through with his idea.
I enjoyed much of the writing you've put forth thus far as it seems on par with a well thought out situation.
I'll have you know it can be rather difficult to defeat a fly without a fly swatter.

final i love this chapter the most i have to say BUT I DO love the hole story too! ^__^ pleessee keep it up!! BYE! ^_^

MORE!

This story has really grown on me!
I like the way you portray the altercations between Harry and Draco.
Good job with your portrayal of Lucius, firm and strict but not necessarily abusive.

I see you haven't updated in a while. Hopefully everything is okay and you're doing alright!

Best wishes

~Marisa

Hmm not sure what to make of this one only that either Harry's going to be permanently trapped and then handed over when LV returns or he's gonna do better than the malfoys expected and get out of said trap or something of the sort...cant really tell though with how little there is..still its good.

Love it!!

great chapter.

nice. would like to see how harry grows up and be sorted

You are going to continue this story, yes? If not I must say I will be dissapointed, and I'm sure other's as well. Fascinating story, an interesting idea I'd like to try, so far a rather predictable but pleasent plot, although I was surprised with the fire insident, didn't see something like black mail comming.
By the way, what was with Harry being emotionless to the Dursley's death, couldn't you mae him happy about it, I know I would be.

update

...nice. ;)

hi , i just read your story and i like it
i hope you do a other one
i can't waith to see what's
going to have been next time

Harry adopted be the Malfoys
this can get intresting
Please update soon

Very good! Hope to see more soon!

Well I must say I love your work. This is the second story of yours that I've read. I think that it's lovely that you have managed to integrate Malfoyness into Harry's actions slowly at an abrieviated rate. I can't tell you how refreshing that is. You know if I had to compare the character Lucius to another character, I would pick Lionel Luthor, Lex Luthor's father, in Smallville. I don't know if you've ever seen that show but if you ever need research for Lucius, I would suggest the third season. I can't wait for a new chapter. Update soon!