This was great. I find Alice Longbottom so interesting too. I really hope you write more fics about her and finish the ones you started!

Wow, nice story. I like it insofar (I love that word, hehe) I hope that you finish this story. It kinda reminds me of your snow white story that you never finished. Please please please pleaase finish this one. Be nice if you finished the percy one also, oh well. Keep up the good work

EAT AT JOES!

Oh my god, that was so good-I love the whole telephone number thing, and the way you found all the similarities between Alice in Wonderland and Harry Potter-I wonder what goes on in your mind sometimes...watch, you grow up and discover a cure for the common cold...you're too smart; it's really freaky! And Alice in Wonderland, to me, has always been sort of surreal-this story captures that essence perfectly!

This is awesome!