wow... this was so unique and different O.o i didn't notice of the formula though, huh... I think i need to read more carefully or w/e. True tho, they are rather "perfect". anyways, chappie one really caused me to drop my jaw. Anyways, laters

XD Ah, how I love it. It completely reminds me of a MHC book. ^_^

Ok - I must admit I did not know what in blazes you were doing with this story. Chapter 2 makes everything quite clear. And I had a good chuckle.

Especially the "I'm going to cut this short because I'm getting sick of my formulas." HA HA HA HA!

(It's funny because it's partly true!) Oh, dear...I still love most MHC novels dearly - but poking fun at them can be ever so hilarious.

I like chocolate. Oh, Toddy. Naughty, naughty.

This is hilarious! =D

Not to be rude (though I can't see how else this could be taken) but why, oh, why was this posted to the Mary Higgins Clark category? If it was an honest miskate, you're forgiven.

I prefer chocolate. Yum!